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12/10/2007 c1 612simpleplan13
Could not have broke me...broken

I like this.. I think its very relateable and true.. the only thing i didnt like is how it went from first person to third.. that seemed a bit off
7/7/2007 c1 2MiScHiEvOuS sMiLeS
yes sometimes guys are the lowest creatures to walk the planet and should be lower than scum since there are guys who do stuff like that all the time. it's like they love u one night and the next day... they don't, and it's stupid and mean. it's like they just take you heart only to break it.

i'll stop rambling now. anyways nice poem, especially for those of us who can relate. keep writing!
5/29/2007 c1 6The Melodious Nocturne
Wow, I like the ryming. I can never fit that into my poems. Good job!


(^.^)0 (the Melodious Nocturne)
5/15/2007 c1 lymli
well, it's really heartfelt, to me, in some way the poem is sweet, I guess, like bitter-sweet.
4/11/2007 c1 Her Wishing Well
Indeed males are evil :P. This was a really emotive and thoughtfull poem. well done.
4/9/2007 c1 M. Williams
I wont sit here and defend my fellow dudes for being complete tools sometimes, and I will instead commend you on a poem that captures a mood very well. :)
3/10/2007 c1 52meaninglessTears
wow... amen sista! men really can be jerks and it's hard to find one that's not. i love how u wrote it tho and how it flowed and rhymed. keep writing! ^-^ and i'm returning the review
3/2/2007 c1 1Summerland-girl
Omg this poem is so sad but great.It really does prove how evil males can be.
12/20/2006 c1 19Raven Ella

I loved it.
12/7/2006 c1 21Whitedragon354
Hug. Skittles for you! look i'm REVIEWING TO SOMETHING!
11/16/2006 c1 85Embellished Heart
So can totally relate. Just got my heart shattered and i feel the pian. Nice work
9/25/2006 c1 1Ralphie2
When i first hit your profile. This name caught my eye immediatly, being a male and all.

This poem scared me in a way that shook me. As i read what you had written i began to see myself in those words. It really shocked me. Lines 14 and 15 inparticular. Very nice. I shall now probably have to go read everything else you have.

9/24/2006 c1 113Travis C. Eckert
Good here, I know that you most likely know this, and others have told you, but not all guys are bad. Though usually those guys don't have much luck with "the ladies".
8/15/2006 c1 14mindOFdeliriousUNREST
yea! thank you, and go girls! (sorry, that's my overly femenist side showing) anyways, great poem, great word choice, and great feeling. it's really good.
8/12/2006 c1 15Beloved Sin
Love it! I just love your work!it was strong
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