for Litera Scripta Manet9/4/2006 c2 superheroesarereal
i heart this story...only one thing:"For the rest of the day she was unable to communicate with anyone." There should be a comma after day and I think that's the only error I found...awethum job
i heart this story...only one thing:"For the rest of the day she was unable to communicate with anyone." There should be a comma after day and I think that's the only error I found...awethum job
9/2/2006 c2 humangus
I'm really enjoying this story so far. It is excellently written, one of the best on this site. I hope you update soon because I can't wait to read the rest!
I'm really enjoying this story so far. It is excellently written, one of the best on this site. I hope you update soon because I can't wait to read the rest!