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10/22/2008 c1 23fatbird33
oo i liked the last line.
2/6/2007 c1 174a silenced revolution
Well-done. I live in an area frequently afflicted by drought, so I can relate. Keep writing!

9/8/2006 c1 33forsooth
I LOVE haikus! And yours are awesome. Very descriptive for their length. =]

"BTW a couple of years ago I solved the chicken or the egg thing. Evolution. Meaning at some point a creature that was almost a chicken laid a mutated egg that was a chicken. The egg came first! ^_^"

Interesting theory! Thanks for the review. =]
8/31/2006 c1 1Mosaic Stains
You descriptions were very nice. And they definitely painted the picture of a drought thoroughly.
8/8/2006 c1 270dustytiger
i got what it was about! well i was thinking the need for rain but that's exactly what a drought is so i was right just not using the same word

i'm not a huge hiaku kind of person, but this works really well, i am starting to realise that hiaku is not just something enlgish teachers force you to do in school but can actually paint a beautiful poetic picture (espcially in a series!) great work keep it up, thank you for sharing
8/8/2006 c1 20Elenive
Great haikus. Though I wish you didn't say what they were on the bottom. It's more fun to figure it out yourself.


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