for Would You Just Listen?2/27/2007 c23 
13KimHua
Neat ending, although you've muddled the tenses a little in places. :-) I'm assuming you wanted the whole chapter in present tense...
13KimHuaNeat ending, although you've muddled the tenses a little in places. :-) I'm assuming you wanted the whole chapter in present tense...
2/27/2007 c18 KimHua
Wow. It's very interesting how you've *completely* altered the story and yet you're still using more or less the same scenes from your first story. :-)
Wow. It's very interesting how you've *completely* altered the story and yet you're still using more or less the same scenes from your first story. :-)
2/27/2007 c10 KimHua
Whoa... Casey's kinda clingy, wouldn't you say? :-) That's something of an abrupt reaction...
Whoa... Casey's kinda clingy, wouldn't you say? :-) That's something of an abrupt reaction...
2/27/2007 c4 KimHua
Okay, I'm confused... I thought this was a sequel/update, but the story's pretty different. :-)
Okay, I'm confused... I thought this was a sequel/update, but the story's pretty different. :-)
10/25/2006 c23 KK
we finally!
we finally!
9/13/2006 c11 116natanna
adventure seeker: was it supposed to be ominous? Not really, but you can read it any way you want. :P
116natannaadventure seeker: was it supposed to be ominous? Not really, but you can read it any way you want. :P
8/29/2006 c11 1Domina-Alearum
Am I right to find the whole Mark and Dom whixpering to each other thing creepy? *eyes them worriedly*
And *whine* I want Denise and Casey to be speaking again.
I'd just like to point out: well done, I can't remember the last time a non-slash fic held my attention like this *applause* Good chapter, my dear.
1Domina-AlearumAm I right to find the whole Mark and Dom whixpering to each other thing creepy? *eyes them worriedly*
And *whine* I want Denise and Casey to be speaking again.
I'd just like to point out: well done, I can't remember the last time a non-slash fic held my attention like this *applause* Good chapter, my dear.
8/28/2006 c10 Domina-Alearum
*whimpers at the impending doominess* Oh dear, oh dear. I like Mark... oh but... Casey's overreacting right? Denise doesn't really have a thing for Mark? *hopehope*
Aw, good chapter, but aw...
*whimpers at the impending doominess* Oh dear, oh dear. I like Mark... oh but... Casey's overreacting right? Denise doesn't really have a thing for Mark? *hopehope*
Aw, good chapter, but aw...
8/27/2006 c9 Domina-Alearum
A delight to read, as always. There's going to be more about Dom right? *likes Dom* Mark reminds me of my friend Ben... *thoughtful*
Good chapter, keep it up :)
A delight to read, as always. There's going to be more about Dom right? *likes Dom* Mark reminds me of my friend Ben... *thoughtful*
Good chapter, keep it up :)
8/25/2006 c8 Domina-Alearum
Poor Casey but he gets all ignored! And... and... I just see it going all wrong.
Good chapter, if tauntingly short. Keep it up :)
You're welcome, m'dear. *stalks fic* Of course if you felt the urge to go and review any of my fics, I'd be equally grateful. *grins hintingly*
Poor Casey but he gets all ignored! And... and... I just see it going all wrong.
Good chapter, if tauntingly short. Keep it up :)
You're welcome, m'dear. *stalks fic* Of course if you felt the urge to go and review any of my fics, I'd be equally grateful. *grins hintingly*
8/22/2006 c7 116natanna
adventureseeker:why poor Casey? He got what he wanted, didn't he? :PThanks for all the reviews!
116natannaadventureseeker:why poor Casey? He got what he wanted, didn't he? :PThanks for all the reviews!
8/21/2006 c7 1Domina-Alearum
Oh, I love Casey. Poor guy. *cuddles him* Still loving this story. Keep it up :)
1Domina-AlearumOh, I love Casey. Poor guy. *cuddles him* Still loving this story. Keep it up :)
8/20/2006 c6 Domina-Alearum
Ooh it's good! Sadly my inner-slashfangirl is begging Casey and Jeff to end up together, but I shall suppress her.
Yay. I love the way you write interactions between characters, feels so natural. Keep up the good work, I wanna know how things get to where you started.
Ooh it's good! Sadly my inner-slashfangirl is begging Casey and Jeff to end up together, but I shall suppress her.
Yay. I love the way you write interactions between characters, feels so natural. Keep up the good work, I wanna know how things get to where you started.