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9/12/2006 c1 50Kristina Suko
Awesome story! Wow... suspense... loved it. Every minute I was hoping she'd get away, but once she started remembering her own path, I figured she'd get caught. This needs to be continued! But hey, it's your story, so... yea... amazing.

=D Maranwe Telrunya
8/12/2006 c1 8AutumnRain16
This is really good. i think that it makes a really good short story. it gives just enough information. I like the descriptions and the stories behind the characters. It would be interesting maybe to write short stories that explained a more in-depth history about the other members of the gangs.
8/12/2006 c1 5Kaggr
Weird...I like it though. Seems like something me and Kanna would do. Go in and delete police files...Yes, I could imagine that. Just like I can imagine all three of us in a jail cell, with me and Kanna saying we should do it again while picking the lock, and you just hiding in the back, away from the two insane jailbreakers. xD

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