5/5/2007 c1 2saccharine lust aerial
oh, oh... i have never read anything quite like this.

it slips under you and it makes your body sway with the words

the words were physical, not just visual

i can feel the 'haughty circles' spinning around me

please, for all of our sakes, keep writing

8/12/2006 c1 29diffident
Brilliant imagery, vocabulary. The scene this poem paints is that of a beautiful decay.

marie