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4/20/2008 c5 sunflower.kiss
Interesting. Update soon. Me likey! (:
3/6/2008 c5 ash
I liked this chapter. Although, it seemed a bit rushed and there were a few grammar issues.

But, OMG! Cliffhanger!
3/6/2008 c5 shepromised-shelied
Gah! Keep going. You can't just leave me hanging there! Pshh.

Dominic is soo... rawr. Heh. I really liked this chapter, except

perhaps you should show more emotions. More in depth of the

feelings that are developing.

You're doing great. Please keep going.
3/5/2008 c5 Ilerya
I'm hooked! I've always loved the Princess idea, Kingdom Hearts being one of my favourite games because it holds the Disney Princess as something more than you really see... Like the stitching that holds the fabric of the world of goodness and light together.

Your take on this is more adult/young adult and its a very appealing, compelling tale. I'm enjoying it wholeheartedly! Your dialogue flows and I enjoy the narration, it's smooth and flows well with the story.
3/4/2008 c5 1superinsane95
aw sweetness please update
3/4/2008 c5 TheTrueBlue41728
Ooh la la. Lowcut dress.

HOT DAMN. Domenic. Lol, that's the name of the German foreign exchange student.

She told him she'd go back to the palace. And two weeks later she's not there?

GRADY FTW.
3/4/2008 c5 1TrixInTreats
who the hell ends at - there is a moemnt of silence.

nononono. update it =]

i likes it...its developing! growing! Mwuhahahahaha

yeah. anyway. i ike domenic. =]
2/23/2008 c4 8Written
can't wait to see what happens next :)
2/23/2008 c3 Written
wow, your writing is actually improving as you go along. that's awesome. another great chapter!
2/23/2008 c2 Written
the King is way too harsh! I hope she finds a happy ending..
2/23/2008 c1 Written
this is very fresh and funny! I totally love it and can't wait to read more. :)
2/10/2008 c4 ash
no promises on a new story!

hmph. but this story is one of the very small few on this site that i actually enjoyed. :(
2/7/2008 c4 MythCreatorWriter
This is a good story... You are going to finish it correct?

I hope so. Some corrections for you, in case you missed it:

"I nodded serenely" Don't you mean sincerely?

I'm glad that you gave them a different accent and made Serenity (which makes me think of Sailor Moon) some umcomfortableness with being in a different life style. Most don't do that.

I love this idea and look forward to your other stories.
2/5/2008 c4 1TrixInTreats
"With a rebel yell, she cried mo're- mo're- mo're!"
2/5/2008 c4 TheTrueBlue41728
Mai name ees Kare-oh-line. I eem from Rah-sha.

^.^

Russian/Ukranian accents are sexy.

Well, all accents are sexy, actually. Except when guys have hick accents. That's not sexy.

Where are we going to meet tomorrow?
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