for Sweet Serenity2/4/2008 c3 MidnightThief15
Please update this story soon. It was another good chapter. And anyone has to admit, Domenic Felix is ANOTHER AWESOME name! XD
Please update this story soon. It was another good chapter. And anyone has to admit, Domenic Felix is ANOTHER AWESOME name! XD
2/4/2008 c1 MidnightThief15
Cool first chapter and everyone has to admit, that dude's first and middle name are AWESOME! XD
Cool first chapter and everyone has to admit, that dude's first and middle name are AWESOME! XD
1/20/2008 c3 Ashlee
The story starts to get good, and then you stop updating! :(
The story starts to get good, and then you stop updating! :(
12/26/2007 c3 
1TrixInTreats
Just because I like Big Bad Wolf doesnt mean you have to ignore this story!
=]
UPDATE WOMAN!
or i'll pump so much motivation in you that you'll...do something incredibley witty, and finish both of them.
1TrixInTreatsJust because I like Big Bad Wolf doesnt mean you have to ignore this story!
=]
UPDATE WOMAN!
or i'll pump so much motivation in you that you'll...do something incredibley witty, and finish both of them.
12/7/2007 c3 shepromised-shelied
OOh. Yay. I likey. A fantastic story so far.
Keep it coming, you're a great writer.
~ShePromisedSheLied
OOh. Yay. I likey. A fantastic story so far.
Keep it coming, you're a great writer.
~ShePromisedSheLied
11/28/2007 c3 Skivi
Good story. I do love a good fairytale. Very minor grammar mistakes. You should be more confident about your writing.
Good story. I do love a good fairytale. Very minor grammar mistakes. You should be more confident about your writing.
11/25/2007 c3 jake
good start... for a fairy tale! you should finish it soon i hate waiting for the end. i hope its finished next time i read it. oh yea your title needs help! :-) good luck!
good start... for a fairy tale! you should finish it soon i hate waiting for the end. i hope its finished next time i read it. oh yea your title needs help! :-) good luck!
11/24/2007 c3 18Death Walks Alone
I'm so sorry about your chapter! (Makes it sound like someone died...) This was really good though, but a little short. Understandable, all things considered, and I await your next chapter as well.
18Death Walks AloneI'm so sorry about your chapter! (Makes it sound like someone died...) This was really good though, but a little short. Understandable, all things considered, and I await your next chapter as well.
11/24/2007 c1 20SAKoi
It's a nice concept, going into a contrasting kind of plot from the happy-ending-prince-charming-yay disney cliches.
20SAKoiIt's a nice concept, going into a contrasting kind of plot from the happy-ending-prince-charming-yay disney cliches.
11/24/2007 c3 TheTrueBlue41728
Hm.
I wonder where you're going with this...
I hope Serenity and Domenic get somethin' going on soon.
Hm.
I wonder where you're going with this...
I hope Serenity and Domenic get somethin' going on soon.
11/23/2007 c2 kailey
good start!
good start!
11/23/2007 c2 18Death Walks Alone
This is cool. I don't really like to read the fairytale stories, but this one is really unique. I can't wait for your next chapter.
18Death Walks AloneThis is cool. I don't really like to read the fairytale stories, but this one is really unique. I can't wait for your next chapter.