for Trying to find a voice7/5/2008 c1 
57JC-Saved-Me
Hey I like this as it has alot of imagery that can be interpreted in many ways.
The fourth and fifth stanzas kind of remind me of the Chronicles of Narnia! That's cool :-)
57JC-Saved-MeHey I like this as it has alot of imagery that can be interpreted in many ways.
The fourth and fifth stanzas kind of remind me of the Chronicles of Narnia! That's cool :-)
8/14/2006 c1 12eighteen hundred
I found a lot of this piece rather cliche; just over used phrases and images ("love has no words to describe it" and the description of trees reaching up to heaven). But I will say that I liked the line "my fingers/ desperate to translate themselves/ into something" very, very much. Just try to come up with different ways of saying what you mean that haven't been used over and over again; and this will be a pretty good piece.
12eighteen hundredI found a lot of this piece rather cliche; just over used phrases and images ("love has no words to describe it" and the description of trees reaching up to heaven). But I will say that I liked the line "my fingers/ desperate to translate themselves/ into something" very, very much. Just try to come up with different ways of saying what you mean that haven't been used over and over again; and this will be a pretty good piece.