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2/23/2007 c1 7S.R. Sleasman
I like the Old English style. It seems to flow rather well that way.
8/15/2006 c1 17Fawkes Ravenwood
Excellent work! I thank you for the review you left me, so I thought I'd check out your work. This is a very sweet poem. Although it seems to be about saying goodbye, it invokes the senses and illuminates a vivid scene chock full of emotion. The Old English added a nice touch, although for the average reader it's a bit over the top. Good work on any level.
8/15/2006 c1 59Frore
Pretty imagery, I like how this poem doesn't sound like every other piece on fictionpress.

My only compaint is that the olde english is inaccurate. "Thy" instead of "thine," in some places, etc. I recommend researching it a little before putting it to use in another poem, but don't let that discourage you from writing.

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