for If You Loved Me Enough2/6/2012 c36 serahei
Great Story.
I knew Brenden's temperament will bring him down sometime as it showed repeatedly when he argued with the hotel's receptionist. But I didn't expect it to bring the story to this direction.
It was just sad how it ended between Harmony & Brenden. Especially when I recalled how their relationship developed on their trip in Europe. But I'm glad you didn't changed the end to an unrealistic, typical chummy scene where Harmony ran back to his arms and kissed and cried and whatever. It's sad, I wanted a second chance for the relationship to work, but I don't think it will happen even if Harmony decided to give it another go. Brenden tended to associate himself with bad slash worthless people (like the 2 asses who tried to rape Leanna and the slut - Tiffany? - I don't remember their names) and put his trust on the wrong place. Even with his quick temper, he was rather cowardly when confronted with things that mattered, like the case with Josh, picture of Harmony, he didn't even has the gut to confront his own bestfriend - Adam). It's sad because they love each other so much, but they can fix their relationship up. Harmony was already experiencing a nightmare before and Brennden was letting himself being influence by people he shouldn't trust.
Maybe things between them will work, but just not in that moment. Just like Harmony said : some other place, some other time. I'd love it if you write a sequel, but even if you don't, it's fine.
Great Story.
I knew Brenden's temperament will bring him down sometime as it showed repeatedly when he argued with the hotel's receptionist. But I didn't expect it to bring the story to this direction.
It was just sad how it ended between Harmony & Brenden. Especially when I recalled how their relationship developed on their trip in Europe. But I'm glad you didn't changed the end to an unrealistic, typical chummy scene where Harmony ran back to his arms and kissed and cried and whatever. It's sad, I wanted a second chance for the relationship to work, but I don't think it will happen even if Harmony decided to give it another go. Brenden tended to associate himself with bad slash worthless people (like the 2 asses who tried to rape Leanna and the slut - Tiffany? - I don't remember their names) and put his trust on the wrong place. Even with his quick temper, he was rather cowardly when confronted with things that mattered, like the case with Josh, picture of Harmony, he didn't even has the gut to confront his own bestfriend - Adam). It's sad because they love each other so much, but they can fix their relationship up. Harmony was already experiencing a nightmare before and Brennden was letting himself being influence by people he shouldn't trust.
Maybe things between them will work, but just not in that moment. Just like Harmony said : some other place, some other time. I'd love it if you write a sequel, but even if you don't, it's fine.
6/4/2011 c36 
5Marjulie
that was amazing. Reading it, I felt like you knew where to take the story and how. Eventhough the ending was sad, it seemed right. Things weren't just meant to be for them. Brenden and Harmony/Leanna never stood a chance.
5Marjuliethat was amazing. Reading it, I felt like you knew where to take the story and how. Eventhough the ending was sad, it seemed right. Things weren't just meant to be for them. Brenden and Harmony/Leanna never stood a chance.
10/19/2008 c36 mbbawp
OK fantastic story, i was crushed in ch 35. Anyways i dont get this chapter, does that mean they can be together another time? or are they done and she'll look for a new love? Anyways i liked your comment about her going to harvard, i m hapy to hear that. But i don't get what happens to brendan and stuff along them lines.
OK fantastic story, i was crushed in ch 35. Anyways i dont get this chapter, does that mean they can be together another time? or are they done and she'll look for a new love? Anyways i liked your comment about her going to harvard, i m hapy to hear that. But i don't get what happens to brendan and stuff along them lines.
6/14/2008 c36 9Asolerael
Wow, I'm speechless. It was beautiful. Stories like this make reading that much more enjoyable. Thanks
9AsoleraelWow, I'm speechless. It was beautiful. Stories like this make reading that much more enjoyable. Thanks
1/13/2008 c36 s2 Vivian
This story is the BOMB man!
is there gonna be another story following on ?
pls make one.. i want hamony and brenden together.. they are so sweet.=]
This story is the BOMB man!
is there gonna be another story following on ?
pls make one.. i want hamony and brenden together.. they are so sweet.=]
1/12/2008 c25 s2 Vivian
This story is really good so far.. cant wait untill the ending...hope its good.=]
This story is really good so far.. cant wait untill the ending...hope its good.=]
1/11/2008 c36 Hazelnut Romance
OMG! That was such a good story. I just can't believe they ended it like that. Is there going to be a sequel? I really want there to be one! PLz, plz, plz, plz make a sequel. I want Brenden and Harm/Leanna to get back together and gain back each others trust. I'll like to see how they'll cope. So I'm begging you to make up a sequel to this, coz I will most, most definitely be reading it! Anyways, that was a great story even though the ending was heartbreaking. I really wanted them together
OMG! That was such a good story. I just can't believe they ended it like that. Is there going to be a sequel? I really want there to be one! PLz, plz, plz, plz make a sequel. I want Brenden and Harm/Leanna to get back together and gain back each others trust. I'll like to see how they'll cope. So I'm begging you to make up a sequel to this, coz I will most, most definitely be reading it! Anyways, that was a great story even though the ending was heartbreaking. I really wanted them together
12/28/2007 c1 super
well i know that this story has been completed for a long time, but i'd like to still give it some constructive criticism...
you seem to have a bit of difficulty with your past/present tenses... so to improve your writing i would fix that alright?
well i know that this story has been completed for a long time, but i'd like to still give it some constructive criticism...
you seem to have a bit of difficulty with your past/present tenses... so to improve your writing i would fix that alright?
12/13/2007 c36 realangel99
This was really wonderful but I wish you do another epilogue and like the song they meet again and then end up together.
This was really wonderful but I wish you do another epilogue and like the song they meet again and then end up together.
9/5/2007 c1 2Among-the-Vampires
What i have read of it so far i liked it. It seems like it is going to be a very good story that i will enjoy reading.
2Among-the-VampiresWhat i have read of it so far i liked it. It seems like it is going to be a very good story that i will enjoy reading.
8/3/2007 c36 22Daydreamer-angel
This is totally awesome. i wished my sotry 'Tagged' was as good as this. love your story contuine writing.
22Daydreamer-angelThis is totally awesome. i wished my sotry 'Tagged' was as good as this. love your story contuine writing.
7/10/2007 c2 SamSaysRawr
M, your prologue intrigues me, so I shall favorite story you & read you later (:
M, your prologue intrigues me, so I shall favorite story you & read you later (: