for If You Loved Me Enough5/12/2007 c36 LIZABETH MERCADO
i really...love your story...but i dont like the ending...
you are so cruel...
how could you tear them afart? you should bring them back together...i want a happy ending...for them both...or if you had a hard time writing the happy ending of Harmony & Brenen...i can fill up that for you..
i can even write their happy ending..if you wish..
i just hate them...falling afart...
please re-write the ending...ok...for the others...
i really...love your story...but i dont like the ending...
you are so cruel...
how could you tear them afart? you should bring them back together...i want a happy ending...for them both...or if you had a hard time writing the happy ending of Harmony & Brenen...i can fill up that for you..
i can even write their happy ending..if you wish..
i just hate them...falling afart...
please re-write the ending...ok...for the others...
4/22/2007 c18 
8Zenosknight
My only complaint is
that this site does not have a bookmark function
My apologies for not leaving a few hundred paragraphs long filled with compliments and thank yous regarding the story, but yea...no time ^^
8ZenosknightMy only complaint is
that this site does not have a bookmark function
My apologies for not leaving a few hundred paragraphs long filled with compliments and thank yous regarding the story, but yea...no time ^^
4/16/2007 c30 146Sexy Vampirechick
Aw poor Leana/Harmony,I know how she feels.But she shouldn't start with Adam.He's everything you can ask for,but he's not Brenden and that's who she loves.
146Sexy VampirechickAw poor Leana/Harmony,I know how she feels.But she shouldn't start with Adam.He's everything you can ask for,but he's not Brenden and that's who she loves.
4/14/2007 c36 xjennnny
omg this i sso good! i love it! r u gonna do a sequel! i hope u do! i want to know wat happens! on of my all time faves now! tahnks for writing this story!
omg this i sso good! i love it! r u gonna do a sequel! i hope u do! i want to know wat happens! on of my all time faves now! tahnks for writing this story!
4/12/2007 c36 valentine
Great Story! You kept it really good to the end, although it wasn't really a happy ending, I could feel the emotion up until the epilogue. There were other stories that were favorites of mine, but, I guess due to the author's writer's block, ended poorly. That happens, I guess. But, thank God, you don't fall in that category. Looking forward to your next story.
Great Story! You kept it really good to the end, although it wasn't really a happy ending, I could feel the emotion up until the epilogue. There were other stories that were favorites of mine, but, I guess due to the author's writer's block, ended poorly. That happens, I guess. But, thank God, you don't fall in that category. Looking forward to your next story.
4/12/2007 c36 jodie
omg this is the best story i have ever read. you could get it published its that good. i cant beleive they didnt get together in the end though cause i really wanted them to. theyd still be happy if it wasnt for there so called friends. i thought they were such a sweet couple. it was brilliant story
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omg this is the best story i have ever read. you could get it published its that good. i cant beleive they didnt get together in the end though cause i really wanted them to. theyd still be happy if it wasnt for there so called friends. i thought they were such a sweet couple. it was brilliant story
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4/11/2007 c18 k
es en favor de miss. collings (his is in favour of Miss. Collings.)
es en favor de miss. collings (his is in favour of Miss. Collings.)
4/11/2007 c3 k
you spanish and your portuguese is not good! try to improve it!
you spanish and your portuguese is not good! try to improve it!
4/9/2007 c36 xonea
that is how its going to end then?
that is really sad...
but yeah..it does seems wrong to suddenly make Leanna forgive Brendon.
its your story anyway. =P
since this is the last chapter, i just want to say that i had fun reading this story.=D
and i cant wait to read ur new story.
that is how its going to end then?
that is really sad...
but yeah..it does seems wrong to suddenly make Leanna forgive Brendon.
its your story anyway. =P
since this is the last chapter, i just want to say that i had fun reading this story.=D
and i cant wait to read ur new story.
4/8/2007 c36 18Rizu Herd
Where was going to harvard mentioned? :S This story is so good! I absolutely LOVE IT! You should so send it to a literary agent!
18Rizu HerdWhere was going to harvard mentioned? :S This story is so good! I absolutely LOVE IT! You should so send it to a literary agent!
4/7/2007 c35 R.F.Y
i was worried how you'd end it, but you've pulled it off magnificently. this piece is amazing, i am totally moved. i think, that maybe it's better if you leave us wondering about the relationship.
Chrome
i was worried how you'd end it, but you've pulled it off magnificently. this piece is amazing, i am totally moved. i think, that maybe it's better if you leave us wondering about the relationship.
Chrome
4/7/2007 c35 2Arej
...wow. That's...pretty powerful. I don't really know what to say, except they're both idiots, and I mean that in a loving way. I think Adam's getting the short end of the stick, but hopefully, well, hopefully everything works out for him...
It's good. A little strange, in parts, flow-wise, but it's good. I don't really know what else to say; I'm running out of things. Leanna/Harmony and Brenden are two very well-defined characters.
-Arej
2Arej...wow. That's...pretty powerful. I don't really know what to say, except they're both idiots, and I mean that in a loving way. I think Adam's getting the short end of the stick, but hopefully, well, hopefully everything works out for him...
It's good. A little strange, in parts, flow-wise, but it's good. I don't really know what else to say; I'm running out of things. Leanna/Harmony and Brenden are two very well-defined characters.
-Arej
4/6/2007 c35 xonea
so is that really how its going to end? HER with Adam?
dAmn, that's sad.
i really thought she was going to forgive Brendon.
so is that really how its going to end? HER with Adam?
dAmn, that's sad.
i really thought she was going to forgive Brendon.
4/6/2007 c35 Lily
Ouch! Man does your penname sum it all up or what? It hurt to read but at the same time it was freaking beautiful. The way she dealt with it seems, to me at least, fitting and understandable. I don't think that it would have the impact if she simply ran into his arms forgiving him. Sad but poetic. It will be nice to see what you do with the epilogue. I have no idea what you have comming but with how well you have constructed this story I know that it will be good.
Ouch! Man does your penname sum it all up or what? It hurt to read but at the same time it was freaking beautiful. The way she dealt with it seems, to me at least, fitting and understandable. I don't think that it would have the impact if she simply ran into his arms forgiving him. Sad but poetic. It will be nice to see what you do with the epilogue. I have no idea what you have comming but with how well you have constructed this story I know that it will be good.