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8/21/2006 c1

23C. F. Handle
What a nice piece. Very tranquil. I love the picture you form with these three lines.

8/17/2006 c1

216ygg
Very original imagery.. especially with the use of "maiden's tears". Great work!

8/17/2006 c1

6Nobody-n-Particular
Very nice - evokes pleasant emotions.

8/17/2006 c1

157hanfiddle
Very beautiful and dreamy. Comment (not for this one, but for others: the title is not normally part of the haiku, or, better said, haiku do not normally have titles...)

8/17/2006 c1

322Basara
for that land only but not on her inner soul...

nice...