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8/16/2006 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
It's so hopeful and cute! Okay, well, the cute-ness is more that it seems like such a happy, hopeful poem, which I usually classify, yes, as cute. And it kind of is. Today is the day. It's like Oh! the Places You'll Go, by Dr. Suess, where it's all cute and hopeful. Wow, overusage of the word cute here, but oh well. =D
8/16/2006 c1 sylvia's syndrome
A nice piece, on the whole. I like the use of parallelism in the structure of this poem. It’s very effective and gives the poem an almost chant-like feel. I noticed some small mistakes, such as the wrong spelling of the word “here” – you needed “hear.” But for the most part this is a nicely written piece. Keep up the good work.

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