for Nothing to Die For10/12/2006 c1 
61mothersuperiorjumpedthegun
You are quite talented.Great word choice and arrangement (am I allowed to compliment arrangement? Oh well. I am anyways. Heh)Your poems, like mine, don't really seem to have much happiness. But then, who needs it? haha. Good job.=]
61mothersuperiorjumpedthegunYou are quite talented.Great word choice and arrangement (am I allowed to compliment arrangement? Oh well. I am anyways. Heh)Your poems, like mine, don't really seem to have much happiness. But then, who needs it? haha. Good job.=]
8/16/2006 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
Wow. It's an intense poem, kind of sad, kind of reflective. While the other poem you wrote was hopeful, this is hopeless. It's like the person is drained, and I can really feel it. It's beautifully written. "Nothing to die for.
Nothing to sacrifice for,
"Wow. Great lines. Great poem.
37TaltushMeiMeiWow. It's an intense poem, kind of sad, kind of reflective. While the other poem you wrote was hopeful, this is hopeless. It's like the person is drained, and I can really feel it. It's beautifully written. "Nothing to die for.
Nothing to sacrifice for,
"Wow. Great lines. Great poem.