for Fallen Angels7/22/2009 c1 
26Mirabella
Aw, true love!
I like the capitalisation of certain words, makes Clouds and Fires appear as places, metaphor for Heaven and Hell?
Great poem. :)
26MirabellaAw, true love!
I like the capitalisation of certain words, makes Clouds and Fires appear as places, metaphor for Heaven and Hell?
Great poem. :)
3/2/2008 c1 56Luna Turner
I really liked how this poem depicted the sacrfices people make for eachother in a strong love relationship. Very bittersweet.
If you're concerned about the rating, this poem would be K ...
I usually have one criticism at least, but I don't even think you have a grammar mistake, so I'm just going to say, very well written, and leave it at that. This is going on my favorites.
~Luna Turner
56Luna TurnerI really liked how this poem depicted the sacrfices people make for eachother in a strong love relationship. Very bittersweet.
If you're concerned about the rating, this poem would be K ...
I usually have one criticism at least, but I don't even think you have a grammar mistake, so I'm just going to say, very well written, and leave it at that. This is going on my favorites.
~Luna Turner
2/29/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
As promised your bonus review!
I like this.. the whole heaven/hell thing was well done... and I love the ending it's so sweet.. a true testament to love...
A few things... why the accent on banished? that seemed weird
Also I like the capitalization of watcher, protector, angel and lobe because those are all his roles, but capitalizing fires and cloud seemed odd...
It's a really great and unique description of love... a pleasant surprise from what the title made me think... great job
612simpleplan13As promised your bonus review!
I like this.. the whole heaven/hell thing was well done... and I love the ending it's so sweet.. a true testament to love...
A few things... why the accent on banished? that seemed weird
Also I like the capitalization of watcher, protector, angel and lobe because those are all his roles, but capitalizing fires and cloud seemed odd...
It's a really great and unique description of love... a pleasant surprise from what the title made me think... great job
2/27/2008 c1 CandleQueen
Aww...I like this. I'm prejudiced, because I have a love for rhyming, and anything that doesn't comply with that OCD irks me XD, but I thought it was really romantic.
-Ramen
Aww...I like this. I'm prejudiced, because I have a love for rhyming, and anything that doesn't comply with that OCD irks me XD, but I thought it was really romantic.
-Ramen
8/18/2006 c1 19night0of0the0moon
its soo good... it dosent matter how long a poem is its the word that matter. ^_^
19night0of0the0moonits soo good... it dosent matter how long a poem is its the word that matter. ^_^
8/17/2006 c1 23Hector Tailies
very interesting. I love how it is simple in imagery and meaning. I would say it would be great if you took this idea and expanded it to be a much longer poem.
23Hector Tailiesvery interesting. I love how it is simple in imagery and meaning. I would say it would be great if you took this idea and expanded it to be a much longer poem.