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for Fallen Angels

3/11/2011 c1 Jasminedesi16
Wow I really like this poem.
7/22/2009 c1 26Mirabella
Aw, true love!

I like the capitalisation of certain words, makes Clouds and Fires appear as places, metaphor for Heaven and Hell?

Great poem. :)
7/5/2008 c1 Isca
"He stripped his own." Beautiful imagery about the power of someones love.
3/2/2008 c1 56Luna Turner
I really liked how this poem depicted the sacrfices people make for eachother in a strong love relationship. Very bittersweet.

If you're concerned about the rating, this poem would be K ...

I usually have one criticism at least, but I don't even think you have a grammar mistake, so I'm just going to say, very well written, and leave it at that. This is going on my favorites.

~Luna Turner
2/29/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
As promised your bonus review!

I like this.. the whole heaven/hell thing was well done... and I love the ending it's so sweet.. a true testament to love...

A few things... why the accent on banished? that seemed weird

Also I like the capitalization of watcher, protector, angel and lobe because those are all his roles, but capitalizing fires and cloud seemed odd...

It's a really great and unique description of love... a pleasant surprise from what the title made me think... great job
2/27/2008 c1 CandleQueen
Aww...I like this. I'm prejudiced, because I have a love for rhyming, and anything that doesn't comply with that OCD irks me XD, but I thought it was really romantic.

8/18/2006 c1 19night0of0the0moon
its soo good... it dosent matter how long a poem is its the word that matter. ^_^
8/17/2006 c1 23Hector Tailies
very interesting. I love how it is simple in imagery and meaning. I would say it would be great if you took this idea and expanded it to be a much longer poem.
8/17/2006 c1 1Eyeofhora
Wow..that's really powerful.You should write more poems.

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