for Deep, Dark Secrets1/28/2010 c3 
1CinderellaWithCombatBoots
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This is my murderous face. It may come across as constipated but do not be fooled. This is what happens when an awesome story is suddenly stopped at a big cliff-hanger. Do you -really- want to feel the wrath of my murderous-psuedo-constipated emotions? Huh? I wouldn't risk it, my friend (: So. When do you reckon the story will start updating again...or...you'll start updating it again, seeing as it doesn't update itself, if you're one of those anally-techinal people (apologies if you are - I offend reason).
I love Ravi, and Phil, and Josiah. And I was bummed when I couldn't click the little friendly "next chapter" button, haha.
The plot is awesome. Oh! And I like the mom's boyfriend too. Popped in my mind there. I want to hear more from him too.
1CinderellaWithCombatBoots-
This is my murderous face. It may come across as constipated but do not be fooled. This is what happens when an awesome story is suddenly stopped at a big cliff-hanger. Do you -really- want to feel the wrath of my murderous-psuedo-constipated emotions? Huh? I wouldn't risk it, my friend (: So. When do you reckon the story will start updating again...or...you'll start updating it again, seeing as it doesn't update itself, if you're one of those anally-techinal people (apologies if you are - I offend reason).
I love Ravi, and Phil, and Josiah. And I was bummed when I couldn't click the little friendly "next chapter" button, haha.
The plot is awesome. Oh! And I like the mom's boyfriend too. Popped in my mind there. I want to hear more from him too.
7/26/2009 c3 1Abducted-Ducks
PLEASE UPDATE SOON I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS
THIS STORY IS INTENSE ND I ENVY U CAUSE U GOT TALENT IN UR WRITING SO YEA I ENVY U ALOT 2 ! :)
uPADTE SON XD
1Abducted-DucksPLEASE UPDATE SOON I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS
THIS STORY IS INTENSE ND I ENVY U CAUSE U GOT TALENT IN UR WRITING SO YEA I ENVY U ALOT 2 ! :)
uPADTE SON XD
7/24/2009 c3 20Darkladyknight
Um... I haven't read this chapter, not sure If i've read the story, just wondering who has taken up writing this? Feburary 2008, I got shocking news... didn't think Jinny was writing anymore... since I was told he was dead.
Dark
20DarkladyknightUm... I haven't read this chapter, not sure If i've read the story, just wondering who has taken up writing this? Feburary 2008, I got shocking news... didn't think Jinny was writing anymore... since I was told he was dead.
Dark
11/6/2006 c2 2DeviantHeart31
its strange that i have almost commented all of ur writng, but i love it.8-) i llove this one two, ist sensual and funii:-)
2DeviantHeart31its strange that i have almost commented all of ur writng, but i love it.8-) i llove this one two, ist sensual and funii:-)
10/9/2006 c2 random
you know who ravi reminds me of? casanova. except the gay kind. well, casanova was supposedly bi, but eh. Ravi rocks! Can't wait to see what happens next! keep up the great work.
you know who ravi reminds me of? casanova. except the gay kind. well, casanova was supposedly bi, but eh. Ravi rocks! Can't wait to see what happens next! keep up the great work.
9/25/2006 c1 7Maris. S
*lol* i really do like this story so far *lol* It cracks me up even though I thought that he was going to get the crap beat out of him when that girl's brother came after him 0.0 scary. Anywhoo, there's another chapter so off on my way I go!
7Maris. S*lol* i really do like this story so far *lol* It cracks me up even though I thought that he was going to get the crap beat out of him when that girl's brother came after him 0.0 scary. Anywhoo, there's another chapter so off on my way I go!
9/1/2006 c2 10afk
i thiunk phil is really really hot! i luv his characterm and oh pink haired boy is getting it too lol
10afki thiunk phil is really really hot! i luv his characterm and oh pink haired boy is getting it too lol
8/24/2006 c1 omg
how culd u leave that kinda cliffie? he was so gonna get laid!
how culd u leave that kinda cliffie? he was so gonna get laid!
8/20/2006 c1 afk
ok, we need to talk... why do you make such hot stories? AND such sexy charas? lol i would love it if Ravi and Cyril met XD anyway, goign back to the talk, i can't wait for next chap
ok, we need to talk... why do you make such hot stories? AND such sexy charas? lol i would love it if Ravi and Cyril met XD anyway, goign back to the talk, i can't wait for next chap
8/17/2006 c1 78chrnoskitty
Wow! I really enjoyed this! I gave it a "Hmm... I wonder" at first, but having read it through... BRAVO! I applaud you! Keep up the great work! ^^
78chrnoskittyWow! I really enjoyed this! I gave it a "Hmm... I wonder" at first, but having read it through... BRAVO! I applaud you! Keep up the great work! ^^