for Broken Memories8/18/2008 c1 
70PoetryQueen
So sad, but well-written. Good job and I hope the bad memories don't over-take the good ones!
70PoetryQueenSo sad, but well-written. Good job and I hope the bad memories don't over-take the good ones!
2/28/2008 c1 CandleQueen
Hm...didn't really stand out to me that much. I like the image of the memory having sharp, unforgiving edges, but I wish you elaborated it so that it became just a bit more deep and thoughtful. In other words, I think if you could give it a bit more length and detail.
-Ramen
Hm...didn't really stand out to me that much. I like the image of the memory having sharp, unforgiving edges, but I wish you elaborated it so that it became just a bit more deep and thoughtful. In other words, I think if you could give it a bit more length and detail.
-Ramen
2/28/2008 c1 10LyricsArePoetry
I don't know what you wrote this about, but it reminds me of old friends and stuff...It brilliant"
10LyricsArePoetryI don't know what you wrote this about, but it reminds me of old friends and stuff...It brilliant"
8/18/2006 c1 22The Ponderer
wow. i like how this poem is so full of meaning and yet so short. nakes it really, really powerful, and i felt like i could relate to it so so easily. nicely done.
22The Pondererwow. i like how this poem is so full of meaning and yet so short. nakes it really, really powerful, and i felt like i could relate to it so so easily. nicely done.