for Gloomy Sunday11/3/2006 c1 
43beauty and the breakdown
m, makes for fantastic reading. cracked, pained, plastic - this piece appeals to my bleeding messy heart. love.
43beauty and the breakdownm, makes for fantastic reading. cracked, pained, plastic - this piece appeals to my bleeding messy heart. love.
8/21/2006 c1 69mostly water
Prettiness:
A broken mess of cocaine & pretty pink nail polish
With memories of abandoning friends teasing you ‘cause
So precious and fake with a cracked façade,Which not even your makeup artist can fix
& soon there is nothing left to fix
=) x
69mostly waterPrettiness:
A broken mess of cocaine & pretty pink nail polish
With memories of abandoning friends teasing you ‘cause
So precious and fake with a cracked façade,Which not even your makeup artist can fix
& soon there is nothing left to fix
=) x
8/18/2006 c1 sylvia's syndrome
I enjoyed this piece. The first stanza was definitely my favorite – it has some really interesting diction. Keep writing!
I enjoyed this piece. The first stanza was definitely my favorite – it has some really interesting diction. Keep writing!