for I Remember9/2/2006 c1 polka dots and addictions
really, really nice description. Well written, and i love the last two lines.
~Bex xx
really, really nice description. Well written, and i love the last two lines.
~Bex xx
8/24/2006 c1 His Mercy's Waiting
Oh, very deep. Especially the end. I love all the metaphors you mixed into this. But I do advise you not to overuse semi-colons, because too many creates a hindrance to the pleasure of reading.
Keep writing!
Oh, very deep. Especially the end. I love all the metaphors you mixed into this. But I do advise you not to overuse semi-colons, because too many creates a hindrance to the pleasure of reading.
Keep writing!
8/23/2006 c1 scotti
Such angst...such torment; I love it! It's dark and mysterious in content, but comes to a perfect explanation in the end. Well done!
Such angst...such torment; I love it! It's dark and mysterious in content, but comes to a perfect explanation in the end. Well done!
8/22/2006 c1 
463All Alone With Her Thoughts
O. Creepy. Billant too in its own way. Written very well. Thanks for reviewing my work! ~Rowan~
463All Alone With Her ThoughtsO. Creepy. Billant too in its own way. Written very well. Thanks for reviewing my work! ~Rowan~