for The Chances That Pass Us By2/27/2008 c2 
32Star the Foxhound
Very interesting, I will be looking forward to seeing where this goes in later chapters.
32Star the FoxhoundVery interesting, I will be looking forward to seeing where this goes in later chapters.
11/9/2006 c1 5Heatless Flame
Please continue. This is really intrigueing, and nice answer to the email. Good foreshadowing as well.
5Heatless FlamePlease continue. This is really intrigueing, and nice answer to the email. Good foreshadowing as well.
10/23/2006 c2 4MissXOX
Haha. Its quite alot of writing. Lol anyways i like your descriptive words. You know i suck at putting descriptive words... Sounds like there are lots of feelings in this story. Keep on writin! =]
4MissXOXHaha. Its quite alot of writing. Lol anyways i like your descriptive words. You know i suck at putting descriptive words... Sounds like there are lots of feelings in this story. Keep on writin! =]
10/23/2006 c1 MissXOX
Interesting... Hahaha it was short xD Wonder what the mail was about. Hey whos the characters? Hehe nice beginning =) Thanks for reviewing mines! XD
Interesting... Hahaha it was short xD Wonder what the mail was about. Hey whos the characters? Hehe nice beginning =) Thanks for reviewing mines! XD
8/19/2006 c1 39EmoAssassin
Nice beginning! It is so true about e-mails! Im really interested in where this story will go, many paths it can take! Thanks for the advertising BTW! Im so touched, heh. And really Perfection is a great topic to work off of!
39EmoAssassinNice beginning! It is so true about e-mails! Im really interested in where this story will go, many paths it can take! Thanks for the advertising BTW! Im so touched, heh. And really Perfection is a great topic to work off of!
8/19/2006 c1 1ayame28
This is a very interesting start! I am curious how it turns out, too. One thing I often wonder about is whether "evil" really is necessary for humans to understand "good." I'm really interested to see what you have to write about it! :D
1ayame28This is a very interesting start! I am curious how it turns out, too. One thing I often wonder about is whether "evil" really is necessary for humans to understand "good." I'm really interested to see what you have to write about it! :D
8/18/2006 c1 4Sakka-Fenikkusu
Well, that's compelling. I'm definitely tempted to read more. You're on my faves now.
4Sakka-FenikkusuWell, that's compelling. I'm definitely tempted to read more. You're on my faves now.