for bleached blue7/9/2009 c1 
1tonight we bloom
Wow, beautiful write. I could never write like that. I love the words you choose as well as your descriptions. Stunning.
I would love opinions on my work from a writer like you, it would mean a lot to me!
1tonight we bloomWow, beautiful write. I could never write like that. I love the words you choose as well as your descriptions. Stunning.
I would love opinions on my work from a writer like you, it would mean a lot to me!
11/12/2006 c1 829Anaare
An interesting play with colors and a beautiful poem. "Soundtrack to the sky", is wonderful! Well done and keep writing.
829AnaareAn interesting play with colors and a beautiful poem. "Soundtrack to the sky", is wonderful! Well done and keep writing.
8/30/2006 c1 63lackluster
blue is a gorgeous color. the sky is therefore gorgeous. even when it's cloudy-grey, which it seems to be a lot of lately
"baby brown, blue girl"- sweet.
63lacklusterblue is a gorgeous color. the sky is therefore gorgeous. even when it's cloudy-grey, which it seems to be a lot of lately
"baby brown, blue girl"- sweet.
8/24/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
half way down it comes across almost like a song. love the phrase 'baby brown' i had to read that over a couple of times to make sure i didn't skip a word or two. great sound.
favourite line would so be 'staring at airplanes with music in my ear tinny from the outside but inside it's a soundtrack to the sky' i'm not sure if u meant from the sky or to but it works either way. so true.
i'm not sure about that last line...
144chaos called creationhalf way down it comes across almost like a song. love the phrase 'baby brown' i had to read that over a couple of times to make sure i didn't skip a word or two. great sound.
favourite line would so be 'staring at airplanes with music in my ear tinny from the outside but inside it's a soundtrack to the sky' i'm not sure if u meant from the sky or to but it works either way. so true.
i'm not sure about that last line...
8/21/2006 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I loved how you played with color in this; the blue's and browns were striking; I also loved the idea of getting away from the world, being in this created atmosphere disconnected from everything else, yet centered by the music and the conversation. Like five bucks and good cup of coffee. I loved it.
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietI loved how you played with color in this; the blue's and browns were striking; I also loved the idea of getting away from the world, being in this created atmosphere disconnected from everything else, yet centered by the music and the conversation. Like five bucks and good cup of coffee. I loved it.
Juliet.
8/19/2006 c1 5TheNewUnderground
love it. and I especially love that all the questions lend a sort of urgency to the whole thing, but at the end it winds down with "until it turns black and stars quiet us" - it almost -feels- quiet. great job. :)
5TheNewUndergroundlove it. and I especially love that all the questions lend a sort of urgency to the whole thing, but at the end it winds down with "until it turns black and stars quiet us" - it almost -feels- quiet. great job. :)
8/19/2006 c1 90poetic abortion
Like someone else has said, this is beyond words. Just . . Gorgeous.
~* Noelle
90poetic abortionLike someone else has said, this is beyond words. Just . . Gorgeous.
~* Noelle