Reviews: Attack Of The Haiku

for Attack Of The Haiku

12/28/2007 c7

18newfoundhope
This one is my favorite so far. :] Splendid diction. All of your poetry inspires me.

3/23/2007 c1 I.O.K.O
And then- the kiss of death.

2/25/2007 c6

3tangelos
This made me laugh out loud. Not particularly sophisticated, but it does work! thanks for sharing! :D

2/10/2007 c10

612simpleplan13
that's an interesting way to look at it.. great idea

2/9/2007 c1

871no.peace.los.angeles
I like this. It's a very simple thought, but it really does say a lot. Wonderful work. Keep writing! :)

1/25/2007 c9

136Elliptical Shapes
Definitely an interesting and lateral view on schizophrenia, I love the wording.

Keep writing,

Alan.

12/22/2006 c10

15Failing Mentality
My! Out of the ten, I like this one the best, Subdued Light.

Failing Mentality.

11/3/2006 c9

43NinjaStoryteller
I've found this to be true for a certain schizophrenic too.

Longer than a typical haiku, but the last two lines are necessary. Very good with words, you are.

10/12/2006 c8

612simpleplan13
interesting concept...i have no idea what it means, but it sounds cool..lol

10/4/2006 c7 simpleplan13
great last line... love it

10/4/2006 c6 simpleplan13
sad with the title... beautifully and well written

10/4/2006 c5 simpleplan13
sweet piece with an amazing title!

10/4/2006 c4 simpleplan13
interesting poem based on the title... I like it a lot

10/4/2006 c3 simpleplan13
interesting extending the haiku and making both the last two lines 7 syllables... great descripton of a disco, but not your best poetic wise

10/4/2006 c2 simpleplan13
beautiful metaphor for faith.. amazingly written

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