for ambition9/16/2006 c1 
144chaos called creation
i love how your poems make me think. my increase in brain activity is all you.
144chaos called creationi love how your poems make me think. my increase in brain activity is all you.
9/10/2006 c1 emergency room romantic
i feel this, and you wrote it beautifully. my only suggestion (and it's a very small one) is to replace 'reaching' with something more powerful, as the repetition in the next two lines lessens the effect of a powerful poem. otherwise, the poem is flawless. beautiful.
i feel this, and you wrote it beautifully. my only suggestion (and it's a very small one) is to replace 'reaching' with something more powerful, as the repetition in the next two lines lessens the effect of a powerful poem. otherwise, the poem is flawless. beautiful.
8/20/2006 c1 36trash can art
I like this underlying message of fear of the unknown. That and I crave and adore any piece of writing that gives justice to stars.
36trash can artI like this underlying message of fear of the unknown. That and I crave and adore any piece of writing that gives justice to stars.