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3/15/2007 c1 4Walking Catastrophe
Okay, I can't say much, but I liked it, as usual. Good job.

Cherry
2/15/2007 c1 60Thrice
Love the depth in this piece. Also liked how you described everything. I just love your vocabulary, it's so much better than mine. X3
1/14/2007 c1 1Mosaic Stains
["Patches cover unfounded wounds, Bloodstreams thrive. On the grounds of the earth. A hidden treasure no more.

"Concrete convictions, In lucid desires. To be lost, Is a myth of old."]Those lines carried a hidden depth to them which was very nice. Great Poem.
1/14/2007 c1 M.D.Irvine
great description
1/4/2007 c1 6Imaginary Parachute
Whoops, in my last review (for "Flicker"), I somehow got it into my head that it was in Fiction. How do I do these things?

In any case, I really loved this. It was sadder than the majority of things I read, especially in the "Poetry" section, but I had a favorite line, or lines more appropriately. "Productions roll on./Hearts skim on platinum clouds." Those two lines really struck my for some reason. I'm not sure about the break in rhythm for the last two lines-it really distracts from the piece's fluidity. However, this is overall a really lovely poem.
1/4/2007 c1 1Dots Mgeez
this poem is actually pretty good.
1/4/2007 c1 1addicted2cocoa
Very nice use of language and imagery.
8/21/2006 c1 35Autumn Reflections
just beautiful. I like how it is divided too. Definitely stirs the imagination.

keep writing!

Autumn^^
8/20/2006 c1 50In the Rye
nice imagery.

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