for Angel12/23/2010 c1 
287Archia
I like the simpleness of this and how everything sentence, bar the last, started with 'she' which shows that you're referring to someone (in this case the angel). I like how you described her.
287ArchiaI like the simpleness of this and how everything sentence, bar the last, started with 'she' which shows that you're referring to someone (in this case the angel). I like how you described her.
8/22/2008 c1 5Mike Kaulitz
I really enjoyed this piece. The way you went about it is autorev. Allow me to explain about my poem. When I capitilized "Night" I was not thinking of it as a time. I motivized it as a soul. Keep writing!
5Mike KaulitzI really enjoyed this piece. The way you went about it is autorev. Allow me to explain about my poem. When I capitilized "Night" I was not thinking of it as a time. I motivized it as a soul. Keep writing!
4/3/2008 c1 13Shasta Valentine
I like this simple, thought evoking poem.
of course i wish you wrote more.
but still.
i believe in angels.
as my guardians (im christian obviously)
so from a christian perspective.
i like that you enter that confusing and unchartered territory.
anyway.
thats my two cents.
off to read your other poetry.
-sv
13Shasta ValentineI like this simple, thought evoking poem.
of course i wish you wrote more.
but still.
i believe in angels.
as my guardians (im christian obviously)
so from a christian perspective.
i like that you enter that confusing and unchartered territory.
anyway.
thats my two cents.
off to read your other poetry.
-sv
3/24/2008 c1 1Moncouerest
So firstly I must admit poetry baffles me.
Mostly, because I can't write it.
The title and summary caught my attention because my current work is somewhat related to the idea of angels, with quite a twist (okay I don't mean to advertise for myself, sorry. . . )
I liked it though, short and sweet, but I can sense serious undertones. It makes me wonder what you were thinking when you wrote this or what inspired you.
1MoncouerestSo firstly I must admit poetry baffles me.
Mostly, because I can't write it.
The title and summary caught my attention because my current work is somewhat related to the idea of angels, with quite a twist (okay I don't mean to advertise for myself, sorry. . . )
I liked it though, short and sweet, but I can sense serious undertones. It makes me wonder what you were thinking when you wrote this or what inspired you.
2/26/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
I like this.. not what the title suggested and still really great... I like the capitalization in there and the ending.. teh only thing was the first two stanzas were... then . and the last one wasn't.. I know but it still struck me as odd
PS thanks for the review.. I know it was for the game, but I figured I'd return it anyway.. lol
612simpleplan13I like this.. not what the title suggested and still really great... I like the capitalization in there and the ending.. teh only thing was the first two stanzas were... then . and the last one wasn't.. I know but it still struck me as odd
PS thanks for the review.. I know it was for the game, but I figured I'd return it anyway.. lol