for Starcrossed Terror9/7/2012 c1 
157hanfiddle
I would posit that it is precisely because of their claim to holiness...
original, and provocative
157hanfiddleI would posit that it is precisely because of their claim to holiness...
original, and provocative
3/28/2008 c1 012323232
very true!
writing this as a concrete poem was very smart,
because you address a topic worth thousands of paragraphs with just a few words
very true!
writing this as a concrete poem was very smart,
because you address a topic worth thousands of paragraphs with just a few words
3/17/2008 c1 7haystar
All of your poems remind me of clues in the cryptic crossword. Very intresting and almost impossible to disect.
But the word 'sources' annoys me.
7haystarAll of your poems remind me of clues in the cryptic crossword. Very intresting and almost impossible to disect.
But the word 'sources' annoys me.
4/24/2007 c1 recycle rhymes
for some reason, my first instinct was to laugh. it just sounds kind of unreal? interesting choice of words.
for some reason, my first instinct was to laugh. it just sounds kind of unreal? interesting choice of words.
3/6/2007 c1 8Dragen Eyez
hmm..I would have liked to see one more long line to balance out the cross, however! What a very striking point, and I love that you use the symbolism of a cross with that point.
8Dragen Eyezhmm..I would have liked to see one more long line to balance out the cross, however! What a very striking point, and I love that you use the symbolism of a cross with that point.
2/9/2007 c1 16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
So true...perhaps because people tihnk they were worth shedding for? Makes me think of the Crusades and the Bible...
16Theory Of The 4th DimensionSo true...perhaps because people tihnk they were worth shedding for? Makes me think of the Crusades and the Bible...
1/26/2007 c1 187THROUGHTHESEEYES
Loved the form and simple, direct thought! Made me think of sacrifices-then and now.
187THROUGHTHESEEYESLoved the form and simple, direct thought! Made me think of sacrifices-then and now.
12/11/2006 c1 13Brandon Byron
The great thing about this poem is it's shortness. It's so blunt that it forces the reader into considering its true meaning. Personally, I don't think you had any overriding meaning, it looks clever enough to serve a purpose as making the reader contemplate.
That's an accomplishment in itself.
13Brandon ByronThe great thing about this poem is it's shortness. It's so blunt that it forces the reader into considering its true meaning. Personally, I don't think you had any overriding meaning, it looks clever enough to serve a purpose as making the reader contemplate.
That's an accomplishment in itself.