for Drained8/29/2006 c1 
270dustytiger
have i read one of your more serious peices before, i'm not sure.. this is really good, i'm used to your humour peices, and it's quiet a talent to be able to do both funny and serious pieces, i'm VERY impressed, great work, thank you for sharing and thnx for the reivew
270dustytigerhave i read one of your more serious peices before, i'm not sure.. this is really good, i'm used to your humour peices, and it's quiet a talent to be able to do both funny and serious pieces, i'm VERY impressed, great work, thank you for sharing and thnx for the reivew
8/25/2006 c1 46Just A Note In The Wind
Wow! I think a lot of people can really relate to this! You do a great job conveying the feeling!
46Just A Note In The WindWow! I think a lot of people can really relate to this! You do a great job conveying the feeling!
8/25/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
Great work, and I can completely relate. I'm feeling so drained lately! Gahh! Well done, and keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57Great work, and I can completely relate. I'm feeling so drained lately! Gahh! Well done, and keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^
8/22/2006 c1 8Written
the last stanza is awesome. a tired feeling from the first two, which could be intentional.
8Writtenthe last stanza is awesome. a tired feeling from the first two, which could be intentional.
8/22/2006 c1 35not jackie
i can totally and completely relate. did you write it about me? seems like it... i love "tired; she wakes up, / she fell asleep that way." are you sure you didn't write it about me? adore it. -xan
35not jackiei can totally and completely relate. did you write it about me? seems like it... i love "tired; she wakes up, / she fell asleep that way." are you sure you didn't write it about me? adore it. -xan