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8/24/2006 c1 145BellonaFlayreRiver
luffles. really do. my favorite stanza is the last one. lovely.
8/23/2006 c1 sylvia's syndrome
I think you did a good job capturing feelings of helplessness in this poem. I liked the first stanza in particular, and the line “let’s just pretend.” Just a note – in the third line of the second stanza, you have written “you self” instead of “yourself.” Keep up the good work!

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