for Weight of the Wingless
1458/23/2006 c1 sylvia's syndrome
I think you did a good job capturing feelings of helplessness in this poem. I liked the first stanza in particular, and the line “let’s just pretend.” Just a note – in the third line of the second stanza, you have written “you self” instead of “yourself.” Keep up the good work!
I think you did a good job capturing feelings of helplessness in this poem. I liked the first stanza in particular, and the line “let’s just pretend.” Just a note – in the third line of the second stanza, you have written “you self” instead of “yourself.” Keep up the good work!