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8/29/2006 c1 34Iris Devine
I really like the meter and rhyme. I like the short lines. I like the imagery; it's very sweet. It makes me feel like it's a cool autumn night and I'm walking along with someone and just the fact that we're holding hands is keeping me warm. I like the reoccurence of "little houses..." It's very good.
8/23/2006 c1 3storyteller451
not exzctly my type of poem but I liked it!
8/23/2006 c1 7PaixAmourJenn
We had to do an "I Am" poem in school too, but it was like an: I feel, I see, I touch, I hear...project. I liked it. So keep writing.

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