for O Mistress Mine10/8/2006 c1 
23La Gitane
Oh I liked that. I liked the way you work circles in the poem and ideas. It's quite a sharp look at the prostitutes and their image... Very well written, and the last three lines are most striking.
23La GitaneOh I liked that. I liked the way you work circles in the poem and ideas. It's quite a sharp look at the prostitutes and their image... Very well written, and the last three lines are most striking.
8/24/2006 c1 bread and circuses
Ooh, I love! 'Bubonic couture' - man, that's a great line. I love the contrasts here, and I like the rhyme. Favourite!
Ooh, I love! 'Bubonic couture' - man, that's a great line. I love the contrasts here, and I like the rhyme. Favourite!