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2/27/2007 c3 3The Ferrett
severely twisted. I like the eye mising bit. Incredibly ouch. Anyway, ::))
10/25/2006 c2 Diana
first few sentences, its supposed to be "an estranged" instead of "a astranged" =)
10/11/2006 c1 4kamikai bomber
Ok here is where you can send your entries for the Closed Door Contest!
10/7/2006 c1 5BAMBAMBOOM
Very nice! Good job :).
9/24/2006 c1 Rikichi's Buddy
this is really amazing! i loved how you wrote this. the style is just shockingly good! i'm almost depressed that there's only two chapters.
9/19/2006 c2 PleaseDeleteThisAccountMods
well. that's gross. ha ha ha! guess i shouldn't be talking, huh? ty for the review, dude! #50!ok, the only thing I would advise against in ur story is the language. I mean, its good for effect every once in a while, but not every other sentance. other than that, it's great! keep it up!
8/26/2006 c1 3tears of emerald
wow. Really. Like, I hope this isn't a one-shot. I like it.
8/25/2006 c1 1catastrophe25
nice and dark atmosphere here, great style of writing.But just one thing, if you don't want this to be booted off by the mods don't rate it K, rate it T or something

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