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4/30/2001 c1 13BerthaCow
Hey Amanda! This is Christine (yeahhhhh) and I thought this was really good .. although I could use Ms Carroll cliff notes to help out a bit! hehe u brat u went to Hawaii? AH! ok well I though it twas very nice and muy divertido! Put more out soon girl and come check out my stories!
4/28/2001 c1 shadowbox
Nice. Very nice description. You should have never taken down your other writings though, they were very good. But i like this alot.
3/29/2001 c1 theaterchick
I really liked the way this poem flowed. In my mind it painted a thrilling image of a setting sun along the beaches of Hawaii (which, I think was the intent). It also seemed to have a hidden meaning, as if it could be interpreted metaphorically (but maybe that is just me ^^).

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