for Does it have to be this way7/1/2009 c5 i v o r y w i n g s
please please please update soon and I shall give you an ice cream sundae; any kind you want ^^. awesome story!
please please please update soon and I shall give you an ice cream sundae; any kind you want ^^. awesome story!
1/18/2008 c1 
3Nicki Saint
I'm such a sucker for the old "i'm-secretly-in-love-with-my-best-friend" cliche and so far I like your twist on it. I also like the chapter title, and the main character's cynical personality - cynics are my fav! It's fun to watch Jeremy and Becky's interactions - they're hilarious. I'm onto the 2nd chapter, but I thought I'd drop my 2 cents here.
3Nicki SaintI'm such a sucker for the old "i'm-secretly-in-love-with-my-best-friend" cliche and so far I like your twist on it. I also like the chapter title, and the main character's cynical personality - cynics are my fav! It's fun to watch Jeremy and Becky's interactions - they're hilarious. I'm onto the 2nd chapter, but I thought I'd drop my 2 cents here.
3/30/2007 c5 KayB
This is tense and I don't think I'll be able to go throught the night without thinking what will happen next at least once. Anyway, it was good and lots of suspense, which is good, and you must update soon.
This is tense and I don't think I'll be able to go throught the night without thinking what will happen next at least once. Anyway, it was good and lots of suspense, which is good, and you must update soon.
3/27/2007 c5 20wee-rebz
aw! i really like this story...your writing style is great, and unlike a lot of people, you've managed to keep it consistantly in the present tense. i really like Jeremy...but it's a pity guys are scum...gr! rebzx
20wee-rebzaw! i really like this story...your writing style is great, and unlike a lot of people, you've managed to keep it consistantly in the present tense. i really like Jeremy...but it's a pity guys are scum...gr! rebzx
3/27/2007 c5 CrazyJaney
No! God, this is heart clenching! It acutally pains me to read, which means you're doing your job right :) And please update ASAP så my heart can start beating again
No! God, this is heart clenching! It acutally pains me to read, which means you're doing your job right :) And please update ASAP så my heart can start beating again
2/23/2007 c4 KayB
They sure do have an interesting relationship. And so much Drama, but I like Drama. Anyway, I'm glad you updated and I hope you finish the next chapter soon.
They sure do have an interesting relationship. And so much Drama, but I like Drama. Anyway, I'm glad you updated and I hope you finish the next chapter soon.
2/19/2007 c4 asherleve
ARGH! I love this story, but it is so sexually frustrating! I want them to have sex already! But other than that, this story has to be one of the best that I've read. Update more often! Every time I get an e-mail about an update in this story, I'm always like,"What story is this? I don't remember this!" But then I read the chapter and I'm like, "Ah, I LOVE this story!" And I love how Jeremy is so kissy-touchy. He's so hot! You're hot, no homo =), keep writing!
ARGH! I love this story, but it is so sexually frustrating! I want them to have sex already! But other than that, this story has to be one of the best that I've read. Update more often! Every time I get an e-mail about an update in this story, I'm always like,"What story is this? I don't remember this!" But then I read the chapter and I'm like, "Ah, I LOVE this story!" And I love how Jeremy is so kissy-touchy. He's so hot! You're hot, no homo =), keep writing!
10/5/2006 c2 4toonmili
i just noticed that you only get reviews if yo're writing a story about gay guys. This is frustrating i'm going back to writing fanfiction. Anyway about your story. I like it so far. Keep it up. I'll keep reviewing, hopefully the more reviews people see the more they'd want to read it.
4toonmilii just noticed that you only get reviews if yo're writing a story about gay guys. This is frustrating i'm going back to writing fanfiction. Anyway about your story. I like it so far. Keep it up. I'll keep reviewing, hopefully the more reviews people see the more they'd want to read it.