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8/30/2006 c3 6Ollie May
Very interesting! These characters are quite interesting. I think my favorite so far is Brian simply because if I was a ghost I'd have to go scare people as my first act too. Very cool.

I can't wait to see where this goes, please update soon!

Ollie May
8/28/2006 c2 13Mr.Satire
I was REALLY excited when I got word that you had begun writing this story! I like it, but for the first time I'm going to give a little criticism. I think Brian's death was a little unusual and misplaced in what seemed to be a light-hearted kind of story. Perhaps that's how you wanted it to be. In any case, I trust you to develop it well, and, as you already have nineteen episodes planned, I am confident that it will have a good story line. The only other thing, and I do this too from time to time, is that you said "up most" and the actual word is "utmost." I'm not trying to offend you or to be negative, Bob. I'm one of your biggest fans (remember I said that when you become famous); I just wanted to give you the heads-up. As always, I look forward to much, much more!
8/28/2006 c2 18TT-da-lamanite

i helped create this thing. at first it was silly, then it got good! really good!

heh heh! stupid candians thinkin there real people with there hair cuts and there shoes and there "pets" there funny
8/27/2006 c2 21Reaper
This is very well written, and I dd like the fact that Brian was killed in front of Kaitlin and she forgot that amongst the confusion...realistic. I'm waiting for more...MORE!

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