for The Seminary Gang12/10/2007 c20 
8R.E.D. the animator
So I decided to read it again. I still can't belive that Jon waved to Kenzi right before she shot him. Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha HA HA HA HAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
8R.E.D. the animatorSo I decided to read it again. I still can't belive that Jon waved to Kenzi right before she shot him. Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha HA HA HA HAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
11/23/2007 c4 6SoggySoul
Feels sorta like I'm in Bible class while reading this with all the history stuff. 'Cept I'm not mormon, so I don't know any of this.
And, wait, where did Jon go? I completely missed that.
-Kirsten
6SoggySoulFeels sorta like I'm in Bible class while reading this with all the history stuff. 'Cept I'm not mormon, so I don't know any of this.
And, wait, where did Jon go? I completely missed that.
-Kirsten
11/23/2007 c3 SoggySoul
Let me get this strait. Brian dies, and his first reaction isn't to freak out because, oh, I don't know, he's DEAD, but instead run around and scare people.
. . . Yeah, I'd probably do the exact same thing.
-Kirsten
Let me get this strait. Brian dies, and his first reaction isn't to freak out because, oh, I don't know, he's DEAD, but instead run around and scare people.
. . . Yeah, I'd probably do the exact same thing.
-Kirsten
11/20/2007 c2 SoggySoul
Very nice first chapter. Happened kind of quickly though, I mean, one minute you're talking about the apocalypse and the next you're being pulled into the abyss. . .I like the abyss. . .
Anyway, I'm now going to review for every. Single. Chapter. Because SOMEBODY told me I had to. And if I didn't the world would end or something, I don't know. Jon's reasons confuzzle me. So. . .I'm going to review, but not all in one sitting because I'm lazy.
-Kirsten
Very nice first chapter. Happened kind of quickly though, I mean, one minute you're talking about the apocalypse and the next you're being pulled into the abyss. . .I like the abyss. . .
Anyway, I'm now going to review for every. Single. Chapter. Because SOMEBODY told me I had to. And if I didn't the world would end or something, I don't know. Jon's reasons confuzzle me. So. . .I'm going to review, but not all in one sitting because I'm lazy.
-Kirsten
10/19/2007 c1 Diane Smith
WAH! Home wireless internet taken away! *dies*
This only means that you won't be getting any edits until I can convince my parent's that I'm not going to stay up until four in the morning editing again...
And then have Ev eat everything...
Derned computer...
Anyway...I was almost done REEDITING Chapter One and all of a sudden...SLAM! No internet on Ev...I thought she had just decided to be mean again, but no...Father and Mother Dearest completely unplugged me...*dead*
WAH! Home wireless internet taken away! *dies*
This only means that you won't be getting any edits until I can convince my parent's that I'm not going to stay up until four in the morning editing again...
And then have Ev eat everything...
Derned computer...
Anyway...I was almost done REEDITING Chapter One and all of a sudden...SLAM! No internet on Ev...I thought she had just decided to be mean again, but no...Father and Mother Dearest completely unplugged me...*dead*
10/14/2007 c2 Diane Smith
This would be so much better if I had been able to send you my edits tonight...even if you were being a brat..
This would be so much better if I had been able to send you my edits tonight...even if you were being a brat..
7/24/2007 c3 Brianghost
Wow lol I had to re read this just for the fun of it. MAN that was a good story. Really gave me a good laugh a couple of times. I forgot alot of the stuff in it. Anyways Really glad to see that you all liked it.
Wow lol I had to re read this just for the fun of it. MAN that was a good story. Really gave me a good laugh a couple of times. I forgot alot of the stuff in it. Anyways Really glad to see that you all liked it.
7/19/2007 c14 B.C
Well Jon is lost and the one with the yellow hair is lost. The book of Jon is geting somewhere. Jon got married at age 15. Brian or the one with the yellow hair tried to become a GOST but it did not work out
Well Jon is lost and the one with the yellow hair is lost. The book of Jon is geting somewhere. Jon got married at age 15. Brian or the one with the yellow hair tried to become a GOST but it did not work out
7/8/2007 c4 3StarsandSteel
Nice description, as always. I want to say good job on making the characters realistic. That's something not seen much in any fiction where the characters resemble the authors.
I'm not usually a fan of anything historic or religious, but I'm enjoying the story so far. The humorous parts are genuinely funny.
The fact that I don't know how they went back in time bugs me a little, but that's a fault of my own. I hate not fully understanding things.
3StarsandSteelNice description, as always. I want to say good job on making the characters realistic. That's something not seen much in any fiction where the characters resemble the authors.
I'm not usually a fan of anything historic or religious, but I'm enjoying the story so far. The humorous parts are genuinely funny.
The fact that I don't know how they went back in time bugs me a little, but that's a fault of my own. I hate not fully understanding things.
6/13/2007 c10 B.C
Well Thay got back to there time line. So Jon not going drive
and thay still have aero.goodbey
Well Thay got back to there time line. So Jon not going drive
and thay still have aero.goodbey
6/12/2007 c7 B.C
Kenzi gets a JAGUAR!. cool a pizza eating King. So the Commander
behind This weird anyway goodbey
Kenzi gets a JAGUAR!. cool a pizza eating King. So the Commander
behind This weird anyway goodbey
6/12/2007 c3 B.C
Well I think its COOL that Brian is a GHOST. Anyway I think
that its a GOOD book so far. I do have to say you did really!
good on the old day people thing well GOOdby
Well I think its COOL that Brian is a GHOST. Anyway I think
that its a GOOD book so far. I do have to say you did really!
good on the old day people thing well GOOdby
5/17/2007 c20 10Silent Will
Now THAT was a good story. I liked the twists at the end with their grandkids interacting with them and some of the oldest mysteries in the story finally coming into the light. And the ending...well, it's a good thing you made a sequel, otherwise that'd be a pretty annoying ending for me.
I think I like this more than I liked Extinction. This had plot, characters, and the description you used was pretty good. I really couldn't find too many major problems with this at all (The ending came a bit fast, but that doesn't matter too much) Well, now I can start SG2. It looks like that's going to have a lot of potential after this one. Keep up the good work.
10Silent WillNow THAT was a good story. I liked the twists at the end with their grandkids interacting with them and some of the oldest mysteries in the story finally coming into the light. And the ending...well, it's a good thing you made a sequel, otherwise that'd be a pretty annoying ending for me.
I think I like this more than I liked Extinction. This had plot, characters, and the description you used was pretty good. I really couldn't find too many major problems with this at all (The ending came a bit fast, but that doesn't matter too much) Well, now I can start SG2. It looks like that's going to have a lot of potential after this one. Keep up the good work.
5/16/2007 c15 Silent Will
Hm..."Are we all doomed to be seperated?" I was thinking that exact same thing. Wow, that band is really falling apart, aren't they?
Up to this point I have no real complaints other than that there are a few spelling and grammar errors that I've seen. Most of the characters seem well developed (but then again, I guess that's only to be expected since I take it you guys were pretty good friends when coming up with this and you knew a lot about each other). At any rate, keep up the good work with SG2.
Hm..."Are we all doomed to be seperated?" I was thinking that exact same thing. Wow, that band is really falling apart, aren't they?
Up to this point I have no real complaints other than that there are a few spelling and grammar errors that I've seen. Most of the characters seem well developed (but then again, I guess that's only to be expected since I take it you guys were pretty good friends when coming up with this and you knew a lot about each other). At any rate, keep up the good work with SG2.
5/11/2007 c6 Silent Will
Oh, goodie. Nothing like an old-fashinoed sabotage mission.
Good work on this so far. The chapters ARE short, but they're easy to read and understand. I don't really have any problems with it now, other than that it seems a bit slow. But I know that a lot of stories start off slow and pick up towards the end, and I'm sure this will be the same way. Looking forward to reading the rest of it.
Oh, goodie. Nothing like an old-fashinoed sabotage mission.
Good work on this so far. The chapters ARE short, but they're easy to read and understand. I don't really have any problems with it now, other than that it seems a bit slow. But I know that a lot of stories start off slow and pick up towards the end, and I'm sure this will be the same way. Looking forward to reading the rest of it.