for Dusky Gray7/21/2020 c1 Lisa
Hey just here to let you know this story has been stolen and published by someone who goes by the name of Kalani Soldyck under the title "Unbroken". I remember reading this story a few years back and enjoying it immensely so I thought I should let you know. Here's a link: book/show/35160810-unbroken
Hey just here to let you know this story has been stolen and published by someone who goes by the name of Kalani Soldyck under the title "Unbroken". I remember reading this story a few years back and enjoying it immensely so I thought I should let you know. Here's a link: book/show/35160810-unbroken
2/25/2015 c25 khadijah.adams05
It was one of the best songs I've ever read on here. It had all the emotions and just the right amount of drama to move you. Everything was perfect, from beginning to end. Good job
It was one of the best songs I've ever read on here. It had all the emotions and just the right amount of drama to move you. Everything was perfect, from beginning to end. Good job
6/15/2014 c20 Guest
You said Dom's cigarette fell to the ground in his state of shock, then you said he flicked it.
You said Dom's cigarette fell to the ground in his state of shock, then you said he flicked it.
6/15/2014 c15 Augusta
In a previous chapter, I believe you said he was 19 and a freshman or sophomore in college? I could be wrong, just thought I should point that out. Great story by the way!
In a previous chapter, I believe you said he was 19 and a freshman or sophomore in college? I could be wrong, just thought I should point that out. Great story by the way!
9/20/2013 c25 
3BleedingInLove
GAH! YOUR AMAZING!
BUT WHY DID IT HAVE TO END! :'(
Anyways, love this and going back to reread!
3BleedingInLoveGAH! YOUR AMAZING!
BUT WHY DID IT HAVE TO END! :'(
Anyways, love this and going back to reread!
9/19/2013 c6 BleedingInLove
Is it a coincidence that I'm going to see my father soon to? Me and dom are like, in the exact same situation with are dads...
Is it a coincidence that I'm going to see my father soon to? Me and dom are like, in the exact same situation with are dads...
1/28/2013 c21 Guest
GO SHAUN!
GO SHAUN!
1/27/2013 c19 Guest
I feel bad for Shaun and he needs to move on because he does not deserve to keep being mistreated. She willingly chose to leave with him and kiss him. He did not make her lie to her boyfriend.
I feel bad for Shaun and he needs to move on because he does not deserve to keep being mistreated. She willingly chose to leave with him and kiss him. He did not make her lie to her boyfriend.
1/27/2013 c16 Guest
This chapter is so sad!
This chapter is so sad!
12/3/2012 c25 Guest
Man...I just finished...wow...loved this story. I'm a sucker for love and true romances. Especially, love that has been tested with trails and that over comes...now to wait for my own "Dom" you really pulled the emotion of each character... I even felt kinda sorry for Shaun. I love Kate and Dom's vulnerablness and desperation for each other. Ok... That's it cause I could gush and gush abot this story... But I will just simply say You did good, loved it!
Man...I just finished...wow...loved this story. I'm a sucker for love and true romances. Especially, love that has been tested with trails and that over comes...now to wait for my own "Dom" you really pulled the emotion of each character... I even felt kinda sorry for Shaun. I love Kate and Dom's vulnerablness and desperation for each other. Ok... That's it cause I could gush and gush abot this story... But I will just simply say You did good, loved it!
11/21/2012 c25 BellaChica
Loved this story. I felt sorry for all involved. I'm glad Dom was able to reconcile with his father and also his Mom. And Ethan is probably smarter and more mature than all of them. Well done, Chica.
Loved this story. I felt sorry for all involved. I'm glad Dom was able to reconcile with his father and also his Mom. And Ethan is probably smarter and more mature than all of them. Well done, Chica.