
10/7/2006 c1
48R. Louise
A moment ago, I read a poem that made me cry.
This one made me cry harder.
Though, through my tears, I must admire your skill to bring out emotions.

A moment ago, I read a poem that made me cry.
This one made me cry harder.
Though, through my tears, I must admire your skill to bring out emotions.
8/27/2006 c1
2W. J. Parlier
This poem is beautiful. It really gives the warmth and the emotion strongly with no mental block. It's form and flow is quite intresting, but it fits together quite well in my openion. Great work.

This poem is beautiful. It really gives the warmth and the emotion strongly with no mental block. It's form and flow is quite intresting, but it fits together quite well in my openion. Great work.
8/27/2006 c1
20The Wandering Musician
Amazing, Bells! I think this is my favorite of your poems. The repetition of the short "wake me," "blind me" lines contrasts perfectly with the following descriptive line. "who deserves life when it has been taken from you?" Beautiful! Keep writing!Alice

Amazing, Bells! I think this is my favorite of your poems. The repetition of the short "wake me," "blind me" lines contrasts perfectly with the following descriptive line. "who deserves life when it has been taken from you?" Beautiful! Keep writing!Alice