for Keeping Promises5/19/2010 c1 
3septasonicxx
oh my gosh! i almost cried! ah i can't believe it.. this was so sad =[
but you wrote it really well, so congratulations! it was awesomely depressing.
3septasonicxxoh my gosh! i almost cried! ah i can't believe it.. this was so sad =[
but you wrote it really well, so congratulations! it was awesomely depressing.
6/21/2007 c1 10blue.eyes.can.be.deceiving
OMG. Ash killed himself.! Wow. he loved her so much which was so super sweet. I just wished they hadn't died, but this was truly a beautiful piece that touched my heart. Love like that doesn't seem to exist anymore, you know? Here it has and it is a definite beautiful thing. I have no criticism for you except I noticed in one sentece you used the word haven't and it wasn't right..sorry for not specifying but my heart is so broke, that is SO sad.!
but sweet at the same time.
I LOVED IT.
ash.(my name's ashlyn..haha, i always sign off as ash)
10blue.eyes.can.be.deceivingOMG. Ash killed himself.! Wow. he loved her so much which was so super sweet. I just wished they hadn't died, but this was truly a beautiful piece that touched my heart. Love like that doesn't seem to exist anymore, you know? Here it has and it is a definite beautiful thing. I have no criticism for you except I noticed in one sentece you used the word haven't and it wasn't right..sorry for not specifying but my heart is so broke, that is SO sad.!
but sweet at the same time.
I LOVED IT.
ash.(my name's ashlyn..haha, i always sign off as ash)
10/30/2006 c1 4Walking Catastrophe
Ow, that hurts. It really does. I sort of expected him to follow suit, Romeo and Juliet style of course, except one doesn't pretend to die then awaken, then die again.
4Walking CatastropheOw, that hurts. It really does. I sort of expected him to follow suit, Romeo and Juliet style of course, except one doesn't pretend to die then awaken, then die again.
10/29/2006 c1 89Lady DreamWriter
Very sad, yet in the end, Ash did come though for Lilly, if only by following her into death. A true sign of his real feelings for her.
89Lady DreamWriterVery sad, yet in the end, Ash did come though for Lilly, if only by following her into death. A true sign of his real feelings for her.
9/23/2006 c1 19shattered teardrops
I like it! I mean I love it! I usually write stuffs just like this one inside my crummy li'l notebook at school for my friends to read and they usually blame me for messing up with their brains! ^^ Too bad I don't have enough time to type my stories and put 'em here.. ^^ But hey! Nice one! keep up the good work!
19shattered teardropsI like it! I mean I love it! I usually write stuffs just like this one inside my crummy li'l notebook at school for my friends to read and they usually blame me for messing up with their brains! ^^ Too bad I don't have enough time to type my stories and put 'em here.. ^^ But hey! Nice one! keep up the good work!
9/13/2006 c1 7Syntax.Writer
I nearly cried. My eyes got all cloudy & such.
Sad sad, tragic.
A bit predictable I must say, but overall I lovers it.
I know! Us younger writers don't get nearly enough credit as we should.
but believe me, someday, 14 year olds will ROOL the world!
Until we get 15.
Which is on Sept 26 for me.
I guess I'll have to postpone my b-day until yours gets here.
So, hurry your b-day up, dudette!
Anywho, awesome writing and thank you oh so much for taking my Reviwes virginity. XD
You're oficially in the A-List.
Cookies are free.
Blanca. xO*
7Syntax.WriterI nearly cried. My eyes got all cloudy & such.
Sad sad, tragic.
A bit predictable I must say, but overall I lovers it.
I know! Us younger writers don't get nearly enough credit as we should.
but believe me, someday, 14 year olds will ROOL the world!
Until we get 15.
Which is on Sept 26 for me.
I guess I'll have to postpone my b-day until yours gets here.
So, hurry your b-day up, dudette!
Anywho, awesome writing and thank you oh so much for taking my Reviwes virginity. XD
You're oficially in the A-List.
Cookies are free.
Blanca. xO*
9/2/2006 c1 Guest
Hey, do you have a Quizilla account? Cos this story sounded really familiar... Except the main character was called Summer!
Hey, do you have a Quizilla account? Cos this story sounded really familiar... Except the main character was called Summer!
8/30/2006 c1 14joby4ever
grabe..ang intense
woah!
I really like the way You write about things...
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
14joby4evergrabe..ang intense
woah!
I really like the way You write about things...
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
8/28/2006 c1 Faedora
Wow, bitterly touching. The ending was bittersweet, but I loved this one-shot. I can't really express how much I enjoyed reading it in words, but I truly did. Though a bit morbid, it conveyed a sence of undying love :) He'll follow her wherever she goes...even to heaven or hell. Great job!
Wow, bitterly touching. The ending was bittersweet, but I loved this one-shot. I can't really express how much I enjoyed reading it in words, but I truly did. Though a bit morbid, it conveyed a sence of undying love :) He'll follow her wherever she goes...even to heaven or hell. Great job!