8/29/2006 c1 Christybell
"The light of a star,
Shafting on brick,
Cuts through the cheek
And carves spider web slits. "
See, this is MUCH better than "My Angel."Lovely, lovely poem.
"The light of a star,
Shafting on brick,
Cuts through the cheek
And carves spider web slits. "
See, this is MUCH better than "My Angel."Lovely, lovely poem.
8/29/2006 c1 Meeeee
oh i love that. it's very pretty in a slightly morbid way. i love the middle bit. x
oh i love that. it's very pretty in a slightly morbid way. i love the middle bit. x
8/28/2006 c1 22This Modern Love
i loved the description. although somewhat difficult, it offers a variety of different interpretations. "spider web slits..." i never thought of webs being slices before...cut by a knife, vengance, or one's own soul?
i loved the description. although somewhat difficult, it offers a variety of different interpretations. "spider web slits..." i never thought of webs being slices before...cut by a knife, vengance, or one's own soul?