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8/29/2006 c1 53AchtungBabyAchtung
beautiful. i LIKE. iz x
8/29/2006 c1 Christybell
"The light of a star,

Shafting on brick,

Cuts through the cheek

And carves spider web slits. "

See, this is MUCH better than "My Angel."Lovely, lovely poem.
8/29/2006 c1 Meeeee
oh i love that. it's very pretty in a slightly morbid way. i love the middle bit. x
8/28/2006 c1 22This Modern Love
i loved the description. although somewhat difficult, it offers a variety of different interpretations. "spider web slits..." i never thought of webs being slices before...cut by a knife, vengance, or one's own soul?
8/28/2006 c1 29Scrunchy
It's a nice poem, this. No discernable meaning to it, but that doesn't detract from how good it is. It's full of pretty imagery! T'was nice to read. Good writing, do continue!

Scrunchy

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