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10/28/2006 c1 Mark Joseph
Shortness can still be excellent, in fact I think you were better off having it short. But that's just my opinion.

M ripley
10/1/2006 c1 27Cait Street
OMG I FUCKING LOVE THIS!Its true and i've done this a thousand times. Very good poem!
8/29/2006 c1 unspecified
great job! I loved it, i love almost everything that you write, great job.

Write on!

Bekah
8/28/2006 c1 9RuchiraMandal
Wow, I like the language-it's so direst and striong and at the same time touching.
8/28/2006 c1 35JAGreenDay
Hey...its going to be alright, i promise..you will at least have your friendship, it would be stupid to break that off because of distance, hell, i have friends all over the world, relationships may end, but friendship dont

J.A.

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