for Torn Apart10/28/2006 c1 Mark Joseph
Shortness can still be excellent, in fact I think you were better off having it short. But that's just my opinion.
M ripley
Shortness can still be excellent, in fact I think you were better off having it short. But that's just my opinion.
M ripley
10/1/2006 c1 
27Cait Street
OMG I FUCKING LOVE THIS!Its true and i've done this a thousand times. Very good poem!
27Cait StreetOMG I FUCKING LOVE THIS!Its true and i've done this a thousand times. Very good poem!
8/29/2006 c1 unspecified
great job! I loved it, i love almost everything that you write, great job.
Write on!
Bekah
great job! I loved it, i love almost everything that you write, great job.
Write on!
Bekah
8/28/2006 c1 9RuchiraMandal
Wow, I like the language-it's so direst and striong and at the same time touching.
9RuchiraMandalWow, I like the language-it's so direst and striong and at the same time touching.
8/28/2006 c1 35JAGreenDay
Hey...its going to be alright, i promise..you will at least have your friendship, it would be stupid to break that off because of distance, hell, i have friends all over the world, relationships may end, but friendship dont
J.A.
35JAGreenDayHey...its going to be alright, i promise..you will at least have your friendship, it would be stupid to break that off because of distance, hell, i have friends all over the world, relationships may end, but friendship dont
J.A.