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1/19/2012 c2 1NeonTime
I think I liked everything in this story, especially the clown (although I did feel bad about the timing of the first delivery, poor guy) and the ending.
1/6/2010 c2 Coolio17
Maria was my favorite.

The twist was good too.
3/20/2009 c2 lala
loved the ending! omg now i'm even more afraid of clowns D:
12/12/2008 c2 7AuroraRose54
Oh shit, that's creepy! O.O
5/5/2007 c2 11effection
There are no words for how fucking creepy that was.

Awesome. Dammit, now I'm going downstairs to make sure all my doors are locked.
4/8/2007 c2 Hyperroll
The ending... is incredible. Kinda creepy though. Now I wonder if the characters are dead or not.

Wow, now I'm all paranoid and this someone's going to knock on my door and tell me I just ordered pizza.

CREPY!
12/2/2006 c2 Midnight Owl
FANTASTIC! The twist was incredible.. I was so engrossed in the characters (by the way, great job.. few people can write such human characters in such a short story) that I forgot about the weird clown pseudoactor.

Incredible job, I loved it!
9/16/2006 c2 LAdidadida
Aw.. I love the ending!

It just conveys the feeling so well. Huhu.

I really want to see more of this (even though it's finished). Oh well.

Would love to see you write more even though you're probably really busy.

LAdidadida
9/8/2006 c2 8Hotkitty
haha, omg, that was just... so freaki. left me with a chill. at the start i didnt like it but i hearted your ending. "Fuck" haha e. & the main guy was hot. we.
9/2/2006 c2 9Bleeding Air
loved it! especially the end. just- "fuck". e. get a flippin' bat out, haha.

i wonder how he knew they had ordered pizza in the first place.. before, anyhow. murderfy the real pizza boy & take over? lol.

all the charas were likeable. hayden was hot. woo. the part where erina got drunk was so cute.

i like how everything was really light-hearted, & then just, unexpectedly, the evil clown. haha. clowns ARE freaky lil things...

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