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24Mistress of Eternity
Heavens its just breathtakingly lovely, why haven't I seen it before?
(And yes, yes, yes! I did see your formatting on deviant art, and formatting does wonders, no? :D )
Come back and write some more, it's been too long!
-Anna
24Mistress of EternityHeavens its just breathtakingly lovely, why haven't I seen it before?
(And yes, yes, yes! I did see your formatting on deviant art, and formatting does wonders, no? :D )
Come back and write some more, it's been too long!
-Anna
10/4/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
im sorry fictionpres doesnt like your formatting, but I like your poem and the title especially so that should make up for it...lol
612simpleplan13im sorry fictionpres doesnt like your formatting, but I like your poem and the title especially so that should make up for it...lol
9/5/2006 c1 20Once in a blue moon
I like the line break decisions. Each line is a distinct, if not complete, thought, which, for me, creates a simple, pleasing way to rotate 360 degees bit by bit. In all honesty, I don't know where this poem has landed me in the end, but I enjoyed the trip none-the-less.
20Once in a blue moonI like the line break decisions. Each line is a distinct, if not complete, thought, which, for me, creates a simple, pleasing way to rotate 360 degees bit by bit. In all honesty, I don't know where this poem has landed me in the end, but I enjoyed the trip none-the-less.
8/30/2006 c1 139Raven-ember
sorry that fictionpress doesn't like your formatting but i really dig your poem. very nicely done.
139Raven-embersorry that fictionpress doesn't like your formatting but i really dig your poem. very nicely done.