for This, I Fear5/13/2007 c1 
19Ladywilde
That was beautiful - very dark and very honest which I appreciate in any poet. Lovely work...
19LadywildeThat was beautiful - very dark and very honest which I appreciate in any poet. Lovely work...
10/23/2006 c1 3stage-one
I don't really know what to say about this one except that I love it. It's brilliant, has a powerful message, and I can really relate to it. Keep it up!
3stage-oneI don't really know what to say about this one except that I love it. It's brilliant, has a powerful message, and I can really relate to it. Keep it up!
9/21/2006 c1 82RootbeerFloat
Wow... omg, I can relate to this so well I think I'm going to read this at my poetry meeting!
82RootbeerFloatWow... omg, I can relate to this so well I think I'm going to read this at my poetry meeting!
8/31/2006 c1 86Cheesy Brussle Sprouts
very well done - It drives home the point without really trying - which is a good thing by the way because poetry that tries to hard simply isn't good poetry.
Kira
86Cheesy Brussle Sproutsvery well done - It drives home the point without really trying - which is a good thing by the way because poetry that tries to hard simply isn't good poetry.
Kira
8/31/2006 c1 Universal Empire
I love the repitition of this piece and the ending. I used to suffer from depression. Now it just comes and goes. Very well written! Thanx for your review!
-Sadistikal
I love the repitition of this piece and the ending. I used to suffer from depression. Now it just comes and goes. Very well written! Thanx for your review!
-Sadistikal
8/30/2006 c1 Jenny Rebel
I used to suffer from depression and this is very true to the theme. also, than you for your review on Unknown Origin.
I used to suffer from depression and this is very true to the theme. also, than you for your review on Unknown Origin.
8/30/2006 c1 12KingdomRain
i love your ending words and how you repeated "This, I fear" anyways, good poem...
12KingdomRaini love your ending words and how you repeated "This, I fear" anyways, good poem...