for The Queen of Motel 63/15/2007 c1 
204Karine Dragon'sheart
*happy sigh* Love the imagery...just absolutely adore it. Thank you for the review, by the way. It's rare that I get a review from someone new nowadays.
Laters,
KD
204Karine Dragon'sheart*happy sigh* Love the imagery...just absolutely adore it. Thank you for the review, by the way. It's rare that I get a review from someone new nowadays.
Laters,
KD
9/15/2006 c1 38the laughing ghost
First, thank you for your kind words. Everyone likes to have their ego stroked and i am no different. I like this poem, it builds up a story that is easily recogniziable and yet not mundane. I especially like "asphalt kingdom", however i hate "lightning crashes". Sorry, but it reminds me of that song by Live. Very nicely done.
38the laughing ghostFirst, thank you for your kind words. Everyone likes to have their ego stroked and i am no different. I like this poem, it builds up a story that is easily recogniziable and yet not mundane. I especially like "asphalt kingdom", however i hate "lightning crashes". Sorry, but it reminds me of that song by Live. Very nicely done.
8/30/2006 c1 270dustytiger
love it! this is an excellent peice, a modern poetic inner-city fairy tale of sorts, good work keep it up and thank you for sharing
270dustytigerlove it! this is an excellent peice, a modern poetic inner-city fairy tale of sorts, good work keep it up and thank you for sharing