for Their Smiles1/4/2007 c1 Universal Empire
Very Uplifting and really sweet! Beautifully written! Thanx for the review!
Sadistikal
Very Uplifting and really sweet! Beautifully written! Thanx for the review!
Sadistikal
10/12/2006 c1 
71Pricilla Grey
Very sweet. I feel the same way whenever I spend time with my two beautiful nephews.
- Pricilla Grey
71Pricilla GreyVery sweet. I feel the same way whenever I spend time with my two beautiful nephews.
- Pricilla Grey
10/4/2006 c1 94AK the Twilight
Very interesting; you portray family in such a good way. However, the ending doesn't seem to focus on family, more on youth. It gets a small bit confusing as to what you're saying. Overall, though, there's some great imagery and some strong use of emotion. Just try to be more focused towards the end and you'll have an even better poem.
94AK the TwilightVery interesting; you portray family in such a good way. However, the ending doesn't seem to focus on family, more on youth. It gets a small bit confusing as to what you're saying. Overall, though, there's some great imagery and some strong use of emotion. Just try to be more focused towards the end and you'll have an even better poem.
8/31/2006 c1 86Cheesy Brussle Sprouts
absolutly right! I know what you mean - I have a half sister and she has a baby Sammy he's a year - I baby sat him for her. compleatly brightened up my week
Kira
86Cheesy Brussle Sproutsabsolutly right! I know what you mean - I have a half sister and she has a baby Sammy he's a year - I baby sat him for her. compleatly brightened up my week
Kira
8/30/2006 c1 38Lissa Wyga
very true and sweet, I have a three yr old niece myself, and that is so true.
38Lissa Wygavery true and sweet, I have a three yr old niece myself, and that is so true.