for Boom!10/27/2006 c1 
30Sarah Rizal
Oh my god this is really really good, your good. There's so much meaning.
drop food not bomb ((:
30Sarah RizalOh my god this is really really good, your good. There's so much meaning.
drop food not bomb ((:
10/23/2006 c1 13Tywynn
It's scary, just how real this is. You've done an amazing job of putting it into words.
13TywynnIt's scary, just how real this is. You've done an amazing job of putting it into words.
9/25/2006 c1 arcane devices
I liked how you started each stanza off with "boom" and the last line was just impacting. - ADD-san
I liked how you started each stanza off with "boom" and the last line was just impacting. - ADD-san
9/11/2006 c1 toxic-noodle725
one word: beautiful.
one word: beautiful.
9/11/2006 c1 Universal Empire
Wow! This was amazing. I loved the imagery used in this piece and repeating Boom! This was great!
Keep WritingSadistikal
Wow! This was amazing. I loved the imagery used in this piece and repeating Boom! This was great!
Keep WritingSadistikal
9/6/2006 c1 4Sierra4
Please go ahead and correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think you've ever BEEN to Iraq. So how would you know anything about what goes on there? And if you say because of the "news", I'd laugh right in your face. Because the news is complete bullshit.
I spent a year there...I think I know a bit more about it than people who've never been there, but yet everyone seems to think they know everything about a war they've never even experienced.
All politics aside, you're a good poet, so well done.
4Sierra4Please go ahead and correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think you've ever BEEN to Iraq. So how would you know anything about what goes on there? And if you say because of the "news", I'd laugh right in your face. Because the news is complete bullshit.
I spent a year there...I think I know a bit more about it than people who've never been there, but yet everyone seems to think they know everything about a war they've never even experienced.
All politics aside, you're a good poet, so well done.
9/1/2006 c1 86Cheesy Brussle Sprouts
very well done - this is an excelent representitive piece for what is going on in the world today - very well done indeed
Kira
86Cheesy Brussle Sproutsvery well done - this is an excelent representitive piece for what is going on in the world today - very well done indeed
Kira