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10/24/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
YAY I updated so I'm back to read! lol Feels like forever! This was so sad! ahh lol very good though!
9/24/2006 c1 41sarah1491
Nice poem, I like it! ^^ Lots of emotion.
9/22/2006 c1 50Chandra-Moon
I've only had one real boyfriend. We started spending time together when his relationship with his girlfriend was kinda fizzling out, though nothing happened until he broke up with her. But when I got paranoid during our realtionship, a lot of the time it was wondering, "Will he do to me what he did to her?"

Which is what I think this poem means, sort of. Keep writing.
9/15/2006 c1 breezy nostrils
i know what you mean, friendship can be draining sometimes, like it's sucking the life out of you. nice work.
9/9/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
This is excellent, well done. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^
9/4/2006 c1 24xLilyx
Lol Cartoons do, indeed, rock. Nice poem, very sad but it has a happy ending! lolYes to please the crowd is the result of doing those annoying speaking to the class things in English...gah thanx for the review..
9/2/2006 c1 31xForeverAndAlwaysx
this is really original, and really good, i like the ending. great job.

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