for Disheartened6/30/2009 c15 bbyxhann
hahahah , the endings super funny with landon .
well great job .
& keep it up !
(:
oh & update son .
(;
hahahah , the endings super funny with landon .
well great job .
& keep it up !
(:
oh & update son .
(;
6/29/2009 c14 Jarah Kollar
(groan) You'd better post the next one, ASAP! Going through withdrawal...
(posts the next two chapters- now the ball is on you)
(groan) You'd better post the next one, ASAP! Going through withdrawal...
(posts the next two chapters- now the ball is on you)
6/27/2009 c13 bbyxhann
aw , that's sad .
only if she didn't use all of her energy .
she couldve even stayed over !
ughh .
but still ,
that was really good .
keep it up & update soon !
(:
aw , that's sad .
only if she didn't use all of her energy .
she couldve even stayed over !
ughh .
but still ,
that was really good .
keep it up & update soon !
(:
6/27/2009 c13 Jarah Kollar
I sure hope you are working on the 14th chapter... very good reading... want to know more!
~Jarah
I sure hope you are working on the 14th chapter... very good reading... want to know more!
~Jarah
6/26/2009 c12 bbyxhann
omg , whoa .
idk what to say .
i'm speechless .
but that was super good .
but still , whoa ..
they cant kill the baby ?
btw , thats one scary dream .
well hurry & update !
i gotta know what happens next !
:D
omg , whoa .
idk what to say .
i'm speechless .
but that was super good .
but still , whoa ..
they cant kill the baby ?
btw , thats one scary dream .
well hurry & update !
i gotta know what happens next !
:D
6/26/2009 c7 bbyxhann
LOL ,
i love the last sentence .
(;
well great job ,
sorry i didn't review the other ones .
but yeah ,
keep it up !
(:
LOL ,
i love the last sentence .
(;
well great job ,
sorry i didn't review the other ones .
but yeah ,
keep it up !
(:
6/14/2009 c1 Jarah Kollar
Hi Becky,
I loved this chapter, I sure hope it's not the only one! I am very intrigued...
Great beginning, great story.
~Jarah
Hi Becky,
I loved this chapter, I sure hope it's not the only one! I am very intrigued...
Great beginning, great story.
~Jarah
11/30/2006 c7 
1blondiexoxo
Hey I really do like the story..excepttake alex out lol have victoria and landon on their own hehe well tyl hope u update soon.
1blondiexoxoHey I really do like the story..excepttake alex out lol have victoria and landon on their own hehe well tyl hope u update soon.
11/29/2006 c7 2Marylyn-Mercy
Oh wow! I love this!
Great writing, great story, great characters!
UPDATE! :-P
- MM
2Marylyn-MercyOh wow! I love this!
Great writing, great story, great characters!
UPDATE! :-P
- MM
9/2/2006 c1 1Dire Calamity
It very much so reminded me of an RP. The style, I mean. Try to make it more of your own style.
I like the story so far, and I'm seriously trying not to sound flame-happy here, but your characters are a tad over-developed (like emotions are all steaming from them) unless that's what you were going for.
I'll be looking for the next installment.
1Dire CalamityIt very much so reminded me of an RP. The style, I mean. Try to make it more of your own style.
I like the story so far, and I'm seriously trying not to sound flame-happy here, but your characters are a tad over-developed (like emotions are all steaming from them) unless that's what you were going for.
I'll be looking for the next installment.