for Before Mom Sees9/23/2006 c1 
3Sleepless In Seattle
Don't mention it. I can't help but love a perfect poem. I can sort of relate to this because sometimes my mom goes overboard on red wine sometimes. I still love it all together.
Jasmyne :)
3Sleepless In SeattleDon't mention it. I can't help but love a perfect poem. I can sort of relate to this because sometimes my mom goes overboard on red wine sometimes. I still love it all together.
Jasmyne :)
9/4/2006 c1 sylvia's syndrome
This is somehow a very sad piece. I can’t place what it is about this poem that conveys such sadness, but I feel it nonetheless. Perhaps it’s the feelings of neglect described in the last few lines. Anyway, keep up the good work!
This is somehow a very sad piece. I can’t place what it is about this poem that conveys such sadness, but I feel it nonetheless. Perhaps it’s the feelings of neglect described in the last few lines. Anyway, keep up the good work!